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Re: Silo's Hotspot - *NEW* Beat up the Stick Animation -WIP

Postby Silo » Fri Apr 25, 2014 11:38 pm

Thanks :)

I will try to make an addition to the animation with sticks actually fighting each other back and forth as I believe that is where reactions to being hit play more of a pivotal role then what I just created

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Re: Silo's Hotspot - *NEW* Beat up the Stick Animation -WIP

Postby Lord » Sat Apr 26, 2014 9:48 am

Your reactions and stiffness are things that have to be cleared for this animation to work out.
When the red guy is in the air getting beat up, he is a bit shaky, fix that.
I would also recommend getting a better base. That one is pretty chunky and stumpy.
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Re: Silo's Hotspot - *NEW* Beat up the Stick Animation -WIP

Postby Swaikha » Sat Apr 26, 2014 1:54 pm

I think the reactions were pretty good man, maybe work on the second punch's reaction though,
make the target react according to the power of the punch, that punch seemed a bit stronger than the first,
so maybe he should fly up a few pixels higher.

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Re: Silo's Hotspot - *NEW* Beat up the Stick Animation -WIP

Postby Silo » Sat Apr 26, 2014 4:29 pm

Thanks a lot guys!
your right practice does make perfect <3

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Re: Silo's Hotspot - *NEW* Beat up the Stick Animation -WIP

Postby Swaikha » Sat Apr 26, 2014 4:33 pm

LordPivot wrote:I would also recommend getting a better base.


I can make you some bases/signature sticks, if you want Silo.

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Re: Silo's Hotspot - *NEW* Beat up the Stick Animation -WIP

Postby Silo » Sat Apr 26, 2014 4:59 pm

I found a few, add me on skype: silodiloz

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Re: Silo's Hotspot - Changing my Style- Flow Test - CNC ME P

Postby Silo » Mon Apr 28, 2014 5:45 pm

Update - Changing Flow: I need help I think it looks alright? Lemme know <3

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Re: Silo's Hotspot - Changing my Style- Flow Test - CNC ME P

Postby Ray » Mon Apr 28, 2014 7:31 pm

Pretty good animations man. I think your flow might be better if you tried to slow down your poses a little... maybe try putting some extra frames in and letting all the movements flow together.

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Re: Silo's Hotspot - Changing my Style- Flow Test - CNC ME P

Postby Reverence » Mon Apr 28, 2014 11:02 pm

Your animations are pretty smooth overall, what I think needs work is that some of your movements seem somewhat unrealistic. I donno :/ It just strikes me that your animations look "rubbery" and a bit cartoonish (for a lack of a better word). lol.
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Re: Silo's Hotspot - Changing my Style- Flow Test - CNC ME P

Postby Pulse » Thu Oct 30, 2014 4:40 pm

I love the arm flail on the 'black stick got power' one.
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Re: Silo's Hotspot - Changing my Style- Flow Test - CNC ME P

Postby The Black Mamba » Thu Oct 30, 2014 5:42 pm

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