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[andyzeke]

Id like CC plz!
Hope you like the animations!
This is some info about me if you want to see it. Andys Info Thread

Beginner: 5/28/16
Inter: Maybe?
Vet: I dunno
Elite: Nah. No way :P

MOST RECENT

Day 1

Jump is odd and floaty, sorry about that

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Day 2

This took absolutely forever to make..

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Day 3

Unfinished, and Scenes switch too fast. (fixing it)

a Duel against Clever :)

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Day 4?

No day 4 for right now, I just continued with the day 3 animation a little bit.

Day 5

Kinda Unfinished.. I flew off into YoutubeLand while making this.. oops.

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NEWER STUFF! (Some more coming soon)

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Also YES I KNOW! there is shakiness at the end.

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Run (It did speed up a little bit)

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Bad combo

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OLDER STUFF

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This was probably my first time doing punches'n'stuff

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A bit floaty but I think its okay

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And there's more yet to come!

[Setto]

alright, imma try my best <3
As for the first one, the hits seem to lack some power and the kick is a little off balance. but overall its not too bad seeing as you're a beginner. Second one looks fine enough except he seems to lose some momentum as the animation continues. The third the run has really stiff arms and legs but its not that bad besides that. The fifth, i think the reaction to the thrown (phone?) is OK but the box is moving too slow.

You're probably wondering, "SETTO WHAT ABOUT DA FORTH 1!!1!!" Well, i didn't have anything useful to say xD. I'm only a beginner

[Alexis]

Nice animations andyzeke! i really like your newest one man :D
the punch and kick looked powerful the way he returns to his fighting stance is kinda unnatural but you will get the hang of it in no time,i think i spot some stiffness on his back there, and Maybe the tutorials here viewforum.php?f=25 can help you.

Courtesy? :)?

[andyzeke]

UPDATE Sorry it took so long, a whole lot of things popped up.. I moved to Europe, had to sell everything in our house in order to move to Europe.

But now.. I am back! I SHALL IMPROVE! (well, try to...)

[matterkins]

Lol whoever voted inters is hilarious.

[andyzeke]

Lol whoever voted inters is hilarious.

Bro, I am Elite I am better than Jojishi. (Not )

Also small update!

[Youngster]

The Running Animation is good, I liked it and it is quite smooth.

That combo thing: The second punch lacks anticipation. The kick also, I think the hands should go to his back so he can balance himself.

Bow, Arrow and Apple: I love the reaction and how the apple falls. Considering the distance (Basing the time before the arrow hits the man.) I think he needs to pull the string more.

Fight: When he jump and punch the shooting stick. I think it lacks anticipation, it's like flew into his enemy.

I am not much of a critic, I only base it on what I see. Also, I'm not good at speaking English. That's all.

[andyzeke]

UUUPDATE! 11/16/2016




CC me Plz!!!!

[SIFTER]

A lot of times, your movements seem pretty static in a sense that the figures stop drop dead after the end of each movement. This is becuase the movements don't flow well; there is no transition what so ever between one movement and another. What you need to think of, at this point is to learn about the principles of animation, and especially follow-through and overlapping motion. Other than that, your combo's choreography is off; the idea of choreography in fighting is to keep the viewer interested as long as possible. It's not always an easy task, but at least in your animation you can make the punches flow together. Don't make the second punch wait for that long. And in order to make the animation as a whole is convincing you'll need to work on your posture, which is a general flaw amongst most animators here—even I suffer from it sometimes, so don't feel too bad about it. If you read this tutorial, you'll probably get what is mean by line of action which is what clarifies and exaggerates a pose in order to make it look and feel more convincing than it would normally be irl. Key in animation is to convince, not to imitate reality. Next is your background, if you want to compensate for bad movements (bad idea), then at least make a BG that is pleasing to the eye, and it doesn't not require a great deal of aristic skill to do so. Even something as modest as this can suffice.

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It might be worth to note that this was al mouse—I do have a graphics tablet, and I prefered not to use it.
If anything the tremors sort of helped with adding power, thought you over did it.

Hope this helped. Keep it up.

[andyzeke]

UPDATE! More cc's please! They help a lot! 11/18/2016

[Im3000]

Really like your latest one, looks awesome!

[andyzeke]

Bump 12/27/2016

A special person, (Blademaster) Decided to give me tasks every day for me to animate.

So I will be doing daily animations for a week. Starting Today. They wont be good, but hopefully it will help me improve and get faster with animation! Expect Day 2 animation soon. Enjoy!

P.s. I wont bump this thread every day

[Im3000]

Looks really good!