New Soda. (More!)

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Re: New Soda. (More!)

Postby Blademaster » Fri Jun 24, 2016 9:55 am

hey my friend.
long time no see, hue hue hue. (cheesygrin

The beam looked really good and showed off a good amount of power. your movement were also spot on on that part.
You could've maybe added a little bigger impact, but that's more likely nitpicking.

the part which bothered me were the last two hits. you could've added a bit more anticipation to make the following attack look more dynamic.

Anyways, still great work. It looks like a small improvement to me. Keep that up !
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Re: New Soda. (More!)

Postby Pop » Fri Jun 24, 2016 11:55 am

Thanks for the feedback guys i really appreciate it! It helps out a lot.
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Re: New Soda. (More!)

Postby XElite109 » Fri Jun 24, 2016 11:57 am

that looks pretty well done pop good job
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