by Silo » Mon Apr 21, 2014 8:52 pm
It is really really fast. You should work on making the movements have more frames, and example is this
a stick moving fast, sometimes it is good to have smoothing like this
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What this means is, the stick moves a lot, then slow it down more and more, this will make a more realistic look to your animation, and can define how you animate.
A lot of animators have their own style of smoothing, which means theirs can look a lot different then what I posted above, but you want to use SOME smoothing atleast, so your video will look appealing :)
The way the stick stands up at the end is pretty unrealistic, it makes it look as if he was on ice.
I like your idea with the fast movement blur on the ground! that is nice! :)
Keep it up! :) Practice makes perfecto
-Silo
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