Re: Hi, which is my rank :D
Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2016 10:59 pmUPDATE 19/08/2016
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Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2016 10:59 pmRe: Hi, which is my rank :D
Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2016 9:27 pmUpdate 30/08/2016
Re: Hi, which is my rank :D
Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2016 3:37 amIt's very short but there's not a lot wrong with it. I think the back foot could have flicked back higher in the run though. Also Zoroak vs Lucario was great but since Zoruak is dark and Lucario is Fighting Steel Zoruak pretty much gets OHKOd in a battle.
I think the reactions and foot movement could have been more dynamic as well as the pose of the green guy in the combo, but the back and arm movements were great.
Edit: The DBZ run is High beg but without something longer it's hard to tell
I think the reactions and foot movement could have been more dynamic as well as the pose of the green guy in the combo, but the back and arm movements were great.
Edit: The DBZ run is High beg but without something longer it's hard to tell
Re: Hi, which is my rank :D
Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2016 11:04 amThe combo with the green and orange guy the orange guy doesn't have the greatest pose to make the punches look strong but overall not bad
DBZ run one was p cool
DBZ run one was p cool
Re: Hi, which is my rank :D
Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2016 6:51 pmthanks :3
Re: Hi, which is my rank :D
Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2016 11:34 pmNew animation:
Re: Hi, which is my rank :D
Posted: Sat Oct 01, 2016 8:21 pmUPDATE 01/10/2016
Re: Hi, which is my rank :D
Posted: Sat Oct 01, 2016 10:27 pmAll of your animation looks fantastic, but there's lack, stiff were included in every animation.
Re: Hi, which is my rank :D
Posted: Sat Oct 01, 2016 11:54 pmPaperv wrote:All of your animation looks fantastic, but there's lack, stiff were included in every animation.
okay, I try not to leave so rigid sticks and thanks :D
Re: Hi, which is my rank :D
Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2016 7:53 pmUPDATE 24/10/2016
Re: Hi, which is my rank :D
Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2016 5:39 pmNemesis-YT wrote:UPDATE 01/10/2016
Can you give me these stks
Re: Hi, which is my rank :D
Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2016 9:03 pmSilver wrote:Can you give me these stks
Hey Silver, to make a request it's better to message Nemesis using the "PM" button under his post count and join date. In the future, please try to comment on the animations (even if it's just a few words) because you were a bit off-topic. The rules are here.
Nemesis-YT, I think your animations (especially the DBZ ones) are looking awesome. You've got some nice full-bodies and effects. The movements look believable, powerful and are smoothly spaced and eased well. I think you're High Beginner right now, because even though your movements look good you've only showed fast paced attack moves. If you demonstrate other movements, as well as some slower movements you'll most likely be on your way to Intermediate.
Re: Hi, which is my rank :D
Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2016 2:19 pmSilver wrote:Nemesis-YT wrote:UPDATE 01/10/2016
Can you give me these stks
I can not, unfortunately, because they are a friend.
To JOJISHI, well, thanks for your comment, lately I'm practicing and softer and realistic movements so to speak, as I said earlier mind, thanks :D and keep practicing.
Re: Hi, which is my rank :D
Posted: Mon Nov 14, 2016 10:36 pmUPDATE
Re: Hi, which is my rank :D
Posted: Tue Nov 15, 2016 3:08 pmCombo
Looks pretty good. However, after the first kick when the stick-figure lands looks awkward. The origin (orange node) of the stick-figure is off balance, since it should line up to be between the feet. Either he should land with the origin in the centre, or because he's off balance he takes another step forward to balance himself out. The pose feels awkward when he's punching and doesn't take a step forward. Everything else looks good.
wraybies made a pose tutorial I think you may find helpful.
Vegito vs Zamasu
Everything about this is fantastic. The background, effects, full-bodies, 3D and especially the fighting. I can't spot any flaw with this one, except for when Zamasu fell forward on the ground in a crouched position (inside the mountain). When he put his hands on the ground, his upper body's movement could have continued for a few more frames and had more easing to it, just to feel less stiff in the upper body. Everything else is amazing though (maybe even close to Intermediate :p), so all I can say is that I'd love to see more. :)
Looks pretty good. However, after the first kick when the stick-figure lands looks awkward. The origin (orange node) of the stick-figure is off balance, since it should line up to be between the feet. Either he should land with the origin in the centre, or because he's off balance he takes another step forward to balance himself out. The pose feels awkward when he's punching and doesn't take a step forward. Everything else looks good.
wraybies made a pose tutorial I think you may find helpful.
Vegito vs Zamasu
Everything about this is fantastic. The background, effects, full-bodies, 3D and especially the fighting. I can't spot any flaw with this one, except for when Zamasu fell forward on the ground in a crouched position (inside the mountain). When he put his hands on the ground, his upper body's movement could have continued for a few more frames and had more easing to it, just to feel less stiff in the upper body. Everything else is amazing though (maybe even close to Intermediate :p), so all I can say is that I'd love to see more. :)