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Outdated's Thread - Obstacle Course 2 Entry
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Wed Aug 17, 2016 9:23 pm
by Outdated
Hey I used to be a member from 2006-2008, and I came back last year and animated some. Getting back into pivot; if anyone remembers me hey lol.
CC's appreciated
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Obstacle Course 2 Entry
New
Extra Joint failed
Was going to be a joint with Elixir, but it failed
By Year
2016
Extra Joint failed
Was going to be a joint with Elixir, but it failed
Day 4
Routine Check-up Failed
Break Loop
1 vs Many
Choice (Failed)
Box Run
2015
beginner: June 2006
inter: 2007
beginner: 2015
Re: Outdated's Thread
Posted:
Thu Aug 18, 2016 9:08 am
by AnimationWizard
not to bad man, when he falls the gravity seems to increase immensly, and his body freezes, and his spine looks a little loose
and your easing could use a bit more practice
Re: Outdated's Thread - 8/27
Posted:
Sun Aug 28, 2016 12:54 am
by Outdated
AnimationWizard wrote:not to bad man, when he falls the gravity seems to increase immensly, and his body freezes, and his spine looks a little loose
and your easing could use a bit more practice
Thanks for the cc, I'll try to improve
update
Re: Outdated's Thread - 8/27
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Sun Aug 28, 2016 12:55 am
by elixir
that slow mo part was sick
Re: Outdated's Thread - 8/27
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Sun Aug 28, 2016 1:48 am
by Hydrogenex
Damn, i was not expecting that bone to pop out, jeez, that was damn good
Re: Outdated's Thread - 8/27
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Mon Aug 29, 2016 12:04 pm
by Outdated
thanks guys, also there's a poll now
Re: Outdated's Thread - 8/27
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Mon Aug 29, 2016 12:14 pm
by AnimationWizard
id say high beg, the slow mo was excellent but still had a little slowness to it, keep it up bro
Re: Outdated's Thread
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Tue Sep 06, 2016 1:43 am
by Outdated
update
Re: Outdated's Thread
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Tue Sep 06, 2016 2:24 pm
by Raymond
Holy shit that was awesome! Great job on the water effects! And I like how it loops. :)
Re: Outdated's Thread
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Tue Sep 06, 2016 2:53 pm
by Clies
You gotta work on those swimming movements it looked like you rushed to get that part done, take your time :)
The animation is very creative tho, good job!
Re: Outdated's Thread
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Tue Sep 06, 2016 3:04 pm
by Setto
The swimming could be better, like clies said. besides that i dont see much wrong with it, looks nice
It wasnt the most polished amazing thing but i personally really liked the water effect o3o
Re: Outdated's Thread
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Thu Sep 08, 2016 5:59 pm
by AnimationWizard
the water was great lol the swimming was a bit wonky
Re: Outdated's Thread
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Thu Sep 08, 2016 6:01 pm
by elixir
you still have a long ways to go, but i see a lot of potential here!
Re: Outdated's Thread
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Thu Sep 08, 2016 8:15 pm
by Jojishi
That loop was super creative. The water effects were cool as well. The main thing you could improve on is the spacing, since it looked a bit shaky (like where the loop was joining the ending/beginning). To make it look smooth, you space consistently so the amount of spacing doesn't change erratically.
Shaky:
|-|------|--|-------|----|------------------|--|-----|
Smooth:
|-|--|----|--------|----------|-------|------|----|--|-|
In the figures above, "|" = frame and "-" = spacing amount.
So as you can see, you've got to be careful it isn't big one frame, super small the next, then ginormous in the frame after. Check through the frames as you animate, make sure it's consistent and apply the appropriate easing in areas when needed. I hope this advice helps.
Re: Outdated's Thread
Posted:
Thu Oct 06, 2016 4:52 pm
by Outdated
small update