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FMem's Thread.

PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2016 3:25 pm
by Mem
Hey! This is my Thread, and... I hope I get good soon! :D

Don't ask about this. PLEASE (scared
http://imgur.com/a/pSJGX

Just a ball throw I did for my clan (ohyou
http://imgur.com/a/hxIKR

Flame said I should ease more before I do anything else, so imma do a lot of easing test before I do anything else (grin
http://imgur.com/a/7edWe

B-Rad vs Mem (Not an RHG or Duelist just for fun ^-^)
http://imgur.com/a/TounH

Re: Mem's Thread.

PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2016 4:00 pm
by Memphis
Hello Mem(phis), welcome to TDD. There isn't much to say about the animation, but do keep updating your thread. Hoping to see more from you soon.

Re: Mem's Thread.

PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2016 4:02 pm
by Outdated
Hey, welcome. There's a lot of static frames and it's pretty short so it's hard to critique your animation. Do you have anything longer than that?

Re: Mem's Thread.

PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2016 4:05 pm
by AnimationWizard
well i can only assume med beg based on the 2 seconds of animation but idk

Re: Mem's Thread.

PostPosted: Sun Aug 21, 2016 2:52 am
by Jojishi
The RHG animation was pretty cool, although a bit on the short side. I agree with Flame that it needs more easing.

The easing test looked good. There could have been a little bit more easing at the start, but the end of it looked great! Foot placement is a bit sketchy though, so try to improve on that where possible.

One last thing: When you update, editing your post won't bump your animation to the top. You need to edit your first post, and then make a new post saying update. This will bump your thread to the top of the animation section so people know that you've updated.

Re: Mem's Thread.

PostPosted: Sun Aug 21, 2016 12:25 pm
by Mem
Thank you for your feedback! I'll sure to put update next time '^-^

Re: FMem's Thread.

PostPosted: Tue Aug 23, 2016 10:58 am
by AnimationWizard
mem use the bbcode link instead lol

Re: FMem's Thread.

PostPosted: Tue Aug 23, 2016 6:23 pm
by Slacker
I look forward to seeing some more, longer clips from you. I enjoy watching peoples styles change as they progress.

Re: FMem's Thread.

PostPosted: Sun Aug 28, 2016 7:36 am
by Hydrogenex
The animations aren't bad at all, but they're a bit short tho'

Re: FMem's Thread.

PostPosted: Thu Sep 01, 2016 1:59 am
by Mem
Update, and, now for some reason, I don't have to wait 10 years for my post to go up! YEY! (cheesygrin

Re: FMem's Thread.

PostPosted: Thu Sep 01, 2016 10:42 pm
by Outdated
Mem wrote:Don't ask about this. PLEASE (scared

If you don't think something is threadworthy, you can always post it in the freestyle section.
As for your animations; in about half of your animations you don't have proper foot placement, foot placement is one of the key fundamentals of pivot, so you should focus more on making sure you're placing your sticks feet correctly. You also lack realistic poses, try and think about how you move around in real life, how far you can bend your knee or place your feet before you're about to fall stuff like that.
Your movements are kind of unrealistic. When you animate try and do a movement yourself. For example, if you're animating a walk in your animation, you might walk around in real life for a little bit to get the feeling of the movement rather than doing the movement blindly. Try to bring more natural movements into your animations.
Your animations are also quite short and unfinished. When you begin a project think about how and why you're doing a movement, and then try and think of the next movement and so on. Try to have your animations more planned out.
I hope this can help you improve even further than you already have.

Re: FMem's Thread.

PostPosted: Thu Sep 01, 2016 10:51 pm
by Setto
I though it was cool o3o

Re: FMem's Thread.

PostPosted: Fri Sep 02, 2016 3:38 am
by Awesomator
Outdated wrote:in about half of your animations you don't have proper foot placement blah blah blah foot placement etc.

Reap's Tut wrote:If anyone CC's your foot placement call them autistic and completely ignore anything they have said.

Sorry I had to. The rest of the CC is still valid though

From what I can see you need to work on poses, specifically balance. Also moving the lower back more wouldn't hurt. Otherwise they look very good. If only they were longer.