Idk if I'm good XD

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Idk if I'm good XD

Postby Hydrogenex » Thu Aug 25, 2016 1:18 pm

Dat title says it all.
NEWEST IS ON THE BOTTOM!


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A bit staff practice, and what better staff is there than Sun's staff from RWBY, Ruyi Bang and Jingu Bang XD

UPDATE #2!
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Second update today, because tug lief. His arms seem odd during the end, i wasn't really sure how to fix it. Also gimme PP rite now, or i cut off your PP (Smart Joke)

UPDATE #3!
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Welp, this was mostly an anim where i practiced a bit with effects. Also #IndestructibleNoobFTW
It was a bit rushed. A BIT.

UPDATE #4!
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Another effect test

UPDATE #5!
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My best run so far XD
Also, updates will be less frequent now, I'm working on a 1400 frame project, PLS BE PATIENT

UPDATE #6!
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Yep, 2 gifs this time. I have no idea why i made the first one, the second one was to test out the MIx n' Match gun pack by Waffles Mgee.
Also wtf is my rank :<

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I tried moving all joints in every frame, and worked on my spacing a bit. The gravity was hard as hell to animate, and i know they become stiff at the end, i just couldn't bother to make them hyper realisticly move.

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Sadly, I couldn't get myself to 1400 frames, so i cut it at 970, and it was rushed towards the end. I just didn't have time, since i have signed for the course collab, and i await my turn. School's a pain in the ass, that's another reason i couldn't get it to 1400 frames. I know this thing sucks ass, and I have started it a long time ago, and just finished it. I feel so bad for not finishing it fully XD

Holy fuck, Update #9 (Took me a while <.<)
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Well, After some long fucking time getting assraped by school and other bullcrap, I think it's safe to say I've gotten motivated to try this again.
And yes, I'm trash now (As if I ever wasn't), but I sincerely do hope I get into the swing of things again. Now about this animation.
It's trash as we all know, and the dude looks stiff af towards the end, but I just couldn't do anything about it, otherwise the recoil would look absolutely ridiculous (It's already bullshittingly big, it's as if he fired a shotgun ._.). Sooo, It's safe to say I'm back.
(Also why does imgur speed up gifs, it just pisses me off so goddamn much ._. and I know it looks slow as hell, I used 15.2 fps, cuz I know imgur is a dick to me.)

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Red Button Collab entry. Not much to say here.

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Yeah, It's a combo, right?
Got bored and made another thing, I don't know.
omgwtfbbqdatsexytraildoe

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Pretty shit, I know.
It's a walk.
Even though it looks nothing like a walk.
:)
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby AnimationWizard » Thu Aug 25, 2016 2:12 pm

try and crop it down a bit next time and are you using imgur?(you already answered that)

the second kick isnt really seen to well, which means spacing is a problem and a little bit of anticipation

as for the beam, he seems to stop and become very stiff, try working on easing a little bit aswell
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Postby Setto » Thu Aug 25, 2016 3:05 pm

The kick combo is odd, as if he's trying to kick some bees out of the air while we was running. There's no movement in the torso for the kicks, the arms are quite stiff, and there's not really any anticipation either o3o. There's not much to the beam, i like the effect doe
Just work on basic stuff, iron out that stiffness and the stop and go. I'd go to the tutorial section o3o
glhf git gud (sorry if that was a bit much o3o)
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby Hydrogenex » Thu Aug 25, 2016 4:13 pm

I can see why you think he's kicking bees out of the air XD

I was just trying to test out the trails tho', but you were right about the torso, and the moves are so damn fast, basically no anticipation.
Soooooo... still not goin' to the tutorial section, I got a lot of new tests coming in soon (And goddamn i think they're quite smooth XD).
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby Hydrogenex » Fri Aug 26, 2016 9:23 am

Updated with da staff!
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby Setto » Fri Aug 26, 2016 9:40 am

I'm pretty nooby myself, so I don't have much to say for this one lol. It's cool, good job o3o
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby Ussay » Fri Aug 26, 2016 10:52 am

Welcome to the forums Hydrogenex :D your animations are pretty decent but you still need to get the basics down 0: to be more specific, easing, spacing, shakiness and footplacement are evident over there, I'd it's a good idea to check the Pivot Tutorials section out, there's a lot of advice for you to improve in this new journey in the animation world :D keep it up bro, hope to see more from you (:
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby AnimationWizard » Fri Aug 26, 2016 12:12 pm

that staff combo was nice, but theres no weight, which im sure you dont need to learn it quite yet so do not worry, the gravity seems a tad off, he seems to shoot down on an angle when he grabs the staff when he should fall down and his knees buckle a little bit
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby Hydrogenex » Fri Aug 26, 2016 12:17 pm

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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby AnimationWizard » Fri Aug 26, 2016 1:03 pm

its actually not bad, as for the arms being odd im not sure which one you mean because they both have rather weird arms
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby Hydrogenex » Fri Aug 26, 2016 1:10 pm

AnimationWizard wrote:its actually not bad, as for the arms being odd im not sure which one you mean because they both have rather weird arms

I felt like the shooters were a bit odd towards the end, like a weird motion, idk
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby Hydrogenex » Sat Aug 27, 2016 2:50 am

Updated with dem effects, and da noob
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby Hydrogenex » Sat Aug 27, 2016 1:32 pm

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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby AnimationWizard » Sat Aug 27, 2016 4:47 pm

hmmm well the effects are nice i must say but the movements need work, add more frames per movement and you should be alright
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