Idk if I'm good XD

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Low beginner (Highly possible)
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31%
Med Beginner (You might be right)
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69%
High Beginner (Right, as if I'll ever achieve such a rank)
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Total votes : 13

Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby Elixir » Sat Aug 27, 2016 6:42 pm

AnimationWizard wrote:hmmm well the effects are nice i must say but the movements need work, add more frames per movement and you should be alright


yes.. adding more frames will fix everything NOT LOL

read this tutorial, it always helps viewtopic.php?f=25&t=665
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby Hydrogenex » Sun Aug 28, 2016 12:32 pm

Update again! Thanks for the tips everyone :D
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby Hydrogenex » Mon Aug 29, 2016 1:49 pm

Updated with a poll, and 2 new gifs :D
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby Setto » Mon Aug 29, 2016 2:29 pm

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spoilers, nigga. use them.

The one with the walk where he falls into the dark abyss was kinda stop and go but it looked fine i guess o3o. The run had a few odd poses that made him look almost unbalanced
The gun one was cool but the way he fires/holds the gun just looks odd
Edit* some of your animations look better than others, but if i had to choose I'd say right now you're low beg
ShadowLith: 450 frames
Katana guy vs big sword dude: 84 frames
pyro vs setto: i think its like 890 frames or something idfk
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby Awesomator » Mon Aug 29, 2016 2:33 pm

When walking, try to keep the movement of the origin consistent. Currently the figure slows between each step which looks unnatural. Also just make sure you move every joint, even the back in every frame. Read through Mitch's tut if you haven't already and good luck.
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby Lord » Mon Aug 29, 2016 3:35 pm

Gotta' keep those joints moving dude. It chops up otherwise. :P
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby Outdated » Mon Aug 29, 2016 4:19 pm

The walking one looks like the back and head are kinda stiff, and the "falling" movement could maybe use a few more frames (it seems too fast). The shotgun one has some foot placement problems, you should always have the stick grounded on at least one foot. There isn't really much wrong with the shooting of the shotgun other than the fact that it's almost impossible to shoot a shotgun with one hand, even when holding a shotgun with two hands you can sometimes get hit in the face by the kickback. It was good that you added some particles to the blood though
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby Hydrogenex » Mon Aug 29, 2016 4:58 pm

How has no one noticed that he didn't fall into the abyss, he was pulled into it. There's an arm that pulls him by his leg.
Weird .-.
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby Hydrogenex » Tue Aug 30, 2016 2:34 pm

Updated, holy hell that pose looks awful
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby AnimationWizard » Tue Aug 30, 2016 3:32 pm

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this was excellent, but the ending was a bit lazy, im guilty of this aswell though,
when he stops after the last swing he just dives into a hanging arm position, e shouldve eased into a more active pose as if hes able to keep fighting
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby Awesomator » Tue Aug 30, 2016 4:08 pm

Yo fam I keep meaning to tell you that usually the newest anim is at the top of the thread. That might be why there are so many low beginner votes in the poll.

As for CC, the walk improved from last time and I can see that you noted my CC which is great. It seems like your biggest problems now are awkward poses and stiffness. Especially that last one for the guy on the left which is really off balance.

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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby Hydrogenex » Sat Sep 03, 2016 4:13 am

Update, k?
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby Setto » Sat Sep 03, 2016 8:38 am

holy shit that was fast
That was pretty cool, I enjoyed it o3o
ShadowLith: 450 frames
Katana guy vs big sword dude: 84 frames
pyro vs setto: i think its like 890 frames or something idfk
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby AnimationWizard » Sat Sep 03, 2016 2:36 pm

wow really fast paced, slow it down just a wink and it will look pretty epic man, the 3d shit looked great too
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD

Postby Hydrogenex » Thu Apr 27, 2017 7:48 am

Well, nothing to say here, update.
The usual stuff.
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