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Re: Idk if I'm good XD
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Sat Aug 27, 2016 6:42 pm
by elixir
AnimationWizard wrote:hmmm well the effects are nice i must say but the movements need work, add more frames per movement and you should be alright
yes.. adding more frames will fix everything
NOT LOLread this tutorial, it always helps
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Re: Idk if I'm good XD
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Sun Aug 28, 2016 12:32 pm
by Hydrogenex
Update again! Thanks for the tips everyone :D
Re: Idk if I'm good XD
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Mon Aug 29, 2016 1:49 pm
by Hydrogenex
Updated with a poll, and 2 new gifs :D
Re: Idk if I'm good XD
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Mon Aug 29, 2016 2:29 pm
by Setto
The one with the walk where he falls into the dark abyss was kinda stop and go but it looked fine i guess o3o. The run had a few odd poses that made him look almost unbalanced
The gun one was cool but the way he fires/holds the gun just looks odd
Edit* some of your animations look better than others, but if i had to choose I'd say right now you're low beg
Re: Idk if I'm good XD
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Mon Aug 29, 2016 2:33 pm
by Awesomator
When walking, try to keep the movement of the origin consistent. Currently the figure slows between each step which looks unnatural. Also just make sure you move every joint, even the back in every frame. Read through Mitch's tut if you haven't already and good luck.
Re: Idk if I'm good XD
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Mon Aug 29, 2016 3:35 pm
by Lord
Gotta' keep those joints moving dude. It chops up otherwise. :P
Keep it up.
Re: Idk if I'm good XD
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Mon Aug 29, 2016 4:19 pm
by Outdated
The walking one looks like the back and head are kinda stiff, and the "falling" movement could maybe use a few more frames (it seems too fast). The shotgun one has some foot placement problems, you should always have the stick grounded on at least one foot. There isn't really much wrong with the shooting of the shotgun other than the fact that it's almost impossible to shoot a shotgun with one hand, even when holding a shotgun with two hands you can sometimes get hit in the face by the kickback. It was good that you added some particles to the blood though
Re: Idk if I'm good XD
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Mon Aug 29, 2016 4:58 pm
by Hydrogenex
How has no one noticed that he didn't fall into the abyss, he was pulled into it. There's an arm that pulls him by his leg.
Weird .-.
Re: Idk if I'm good XD
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Tue Aug 30, 2016 2:34 pm
by Hydrogenex
Updated, holy hell that pose looks awful
Re: Idk if I'm good XD
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Tue Aug 30, 2016 3:32 pm
by AnimationWizard
this was excellent, but the ending was a bit lazy, im guilty of this aswell though,
when he stops after the last swing he just dives into a hanging arm position, e shouldve eased into a more active pose as if hes able to keep fighting
Re: Idk if I'm good XD
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Tue Aug 30, 2016 4:08 pm
by Awesomator
Yo fam I keep meaning to tell you that usually the newest anim is at the top of the thread. That might be why there are so many low beginner votes in the poll.
As for CC, the walk improved from last time and I can see that you noted my CC which is great. It seems like your biggest problems now are awkward poses and stiffness. Especially that last one for the guy on the left which is really off balance.
Good job :)
Re: Idk if I'm good XD
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Sat Sep 03, 2016 4:13 am
by Hydrogenex
Update, k?
Re: Idk if I'm good XD
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Sat Sep 03, 2016 8:38 am
by Setto
holy shit that was fast
That was pretty cool, I enjoyed it o3o
Re: Idk if I'm good XD
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Sat Sep 03, 2016 2:36 pm
by AnimationWizard
wow really fast paced, slow it down just a wink and it will look pretty epic man, the 3d shit looked great too
Re: Idk if I'm good XD
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Thu Apr 27, 2017 7:48 am
by Hydrogenex
Well, nothing to say here, update.
The usual stuff.
I'm back I guess.