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Postby Mcreeses » Sat Oct 22, 2016 8:33 pm

What do you guys think?
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Re: Rank :p

Postby Im3000 » Sat Oct 22, 2016 9:11 pm

Impressive! I think you're high beginner!
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Re: Rank :p

Postby Mcreeses » Sat Oct 22, 2016 10:04 pm

Thank you kind sir
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Postby andyzeke » Sun Oct 23, 2016 6:49 am

Id say Med-low beginner, your running is well made, but it still is a little choppy and the transition to the wall is a little weird. His upper body jumps straight up, and he loses a lot of momentum.

The flip is really good but where did all that speed come from? The 2nd flip is also good but still choppy. Make sure you do a little more easing on some parts (Like when he's about to do a backflip or when he stands straight up near the end).

But overall your animation is pretty nice. Have you read Mitch's tutorial yet? I'ts one of the most helpful tutorials out there for all kinds of techniques (Like flow and easing and some other neat stuff).

Mitch's tutorial is here: viewtopic.php?f=25&t=665 , After reading that you can read more tutorials in the tutorial section. Can't wait to see more tutorials from you :D.
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Re: Rank :p

Postby Mcreeses » Sun Oct 23, 2016 12:34 pm

Thanks for the advice. It helps. And no I don't think I have seen it yet
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Re: Rank :p

Postby Finom » Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:39 pm

Thank you kind sir, for triple posting. Try your best to refrain from doing so, as there is an edit button. Don't worry too much for now, as I believe you were confused as why the messages weren't showing, due to the fact that they have to be approved first by a moderator when new users join, to prevent bots. As for the animation, I would simply suggest going over through all the tutorials and understanding the fundementals. It's nice to see you have larger ambitions, but smooth out the little parts, it helps a lot.
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Re: Rank :p

Postby TθPS » Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:55 pm

nice. The guy shouldn't be able to do a backflip with that start, since he would need more power to jump high as possible and do the flip, try to make the start more powerfull. I would say that you're med-beginner.
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