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Re: ATTACK!

Postby h0rseradish » Tue Mar 07, 2017 2:21 am

I really like your stuff so far! The stickmen in your animations have some nice, dynamic moves and brutal strikes, the impact of which is particularly apparent on that 'few stickmen vs another stickman' (paraphrased) animation. There is occasional choppiness in some of their movements, which is notable around the ending sequences of some of your animations, but you most probably know that, seeing your attempts at correction. I like your style!

Also, I think it's good that you're figuring out different things, such as the water splash thingy. It might not be pretty yet, but with a few more attempts you might make it nicely! Fingers crossed!
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Re: ATTACK!

Postby Valkyn » Tue Mar 07, 2017 9:17 pm

Wow, that's a HUGE improvement there. Only thing I would point out is the the foot placement when he lands. Other than that, it's fluid and crisp with nice movement and poses. Very impressive.
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Re: ATTACK!

Postby Clever » Wed Mar 08, 2017 8:45 pm

Thanks for the comments, guys. Bump.
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Re: RUSTY boiiiiii

Postby Clever » Mon Oct 16, 2017 3:06 am

BUMP MOTHAFCKZACSASCASCAS
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Re: RUSTY boiiiiii

Postby Spookage » Mon Oct 16, 2017 11:52 pm

your shit's lookin p good fam, keep up the good work. no cnc here, but damn i love the way you animate
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Re: RUSTY boiiiiii

Postby FrozenSoulHD » Tue Oct 17, 2017 1:11 am

Good animations!
2 problems I see straight away is shakiness and foot placement, which are easy things that can be fixed to improve the animation.
Hope this helped :)
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