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Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (Please check, need help.)

Postby MrDaril » Mon Nov 07, 2016 2:08 pm

Getting better.
Too bad there are not many opinions to be heard on DD anymore.
It's dying a painful and semi-slow death.
There are like 8 people online at most.
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Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (Please check, need help.)

Postby Youngster » Tue Nov 08, 2016 3:41 am

MrDaril wrote:Getting better.
Too bad there are not many opinions to be heard on DD anymore.
It's dying a painful and semi-slow death.
There are like 8 people online at most.


Too bad, man. I want someone to criticize my work so I can improve.


Anyways, new update...
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Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (Please check, need help.)

Postby andyzeke » Wed Nov 09, 2016 7:01 am

You're a fast improver no doubt. I rank you as Medium beginner (Maybe high)

Your newest animation is pretty nice, when the Green guy goes to punch, it doesn't really look like a full on punch. His stance is short.

Also, looking at John wick, I see you have shakiness in him (green guy again) when he stands up, and when the pink guy falls over he almost picks too much speed too quickly. Ease a tiny bit more near the beginning.

Finally, the stickman who shoots the pink circle and 2 kicks thing, In the beginning when he steps backwards his legs are still having shakiness and when he puts the gun down, that's maybe a little bit too quick. Anyway, that's mainly all I can cc for now.

Just make sure you try to keep your feet in the same place.
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Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (Please check, need help.)

Postby Youngster » Wed Nov 09, 2016 11:47 am

New animation!!!
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Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (Please check, need help.)

Postby Youngster » Thu Nov 10, 2016 11:37 am

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Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (Please check, need help.)

Postby Valkyn » Thu Nov 10, 2016 6:27 pm

Is he trying to go against wind, or...?
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Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (Please check, need help.)

Postby Youngster » Thu Nov 10, 2016 9:08 pm

Yes he is
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Re: PivotYoungster's Thread

Postby Youngster » Fri Nov 11, 2016 12:34 pm

New animations.
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Re: PivotYoungster's Thread

Postby andyzeke » Fri Nov 11, 2016 2:01 pm

New animations are pretty good, You have defiantly improved. Keep at it c:
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Re: PivotYoungster's Thread

Postby Youngster » Sat Nov 12, 2016 12:49 am

andyzeke wrote:New animations are pretty good, You have defiantly improved. Keep at it c:


Thank you but what do you mean defiantly? :?:

Also, new update.
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Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (A CC a Day Keeps the Noobness A

Postby Im3000 » Sat Nov 12, 2016 2:35 am

Nice animations! You're really good!
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Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (A CC a Day Keeps the Noobness A

Postby Youngster » Sat Nov 12, 2016 9:07 am

Im3000 wrote:Nice animations! You're really good!


Thank you soo much!! (smile
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Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (A CC a Day Keeps the Noobness A

Postby Youngster » Tue Nov 15, 2016 1:16 am

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Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (A CC a Day Keeps the Noobness A

Postby Youngster » Tue Nov 15, 2016 6:40 pm

Update. Practice animations.
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Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (A CC a Day Keeps the Noobness A

Postby Youngster » Thu Nov 17, 2016 2:28 am

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