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Re: ATTACK!

Postby h0rseradish » Tue Mar 07, 2017 2:21 am

I really like your stuff so far! The stickmen in your animations have some nice, dynamic moves and brutal strikes, the impact of which is particularly apparent on that 'few stickmen vs another stickman' (paraphrased) animation. There is occasional choppiness in some of their movements, which is notable around the ending sequences of some of your animations, but you most probably know that, seeing your attempts at correction. I like your style!

Also, I think it's good that you're figuring out different things, such as the water splash thingy. It might not be pretty yet, but with a few more attempts you might make it nicely! Fingers crossed!
Look, I've got my own thread! - viewtopic.php?f=18&t=4612
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Re: ATTACK!

Postby Valkyn » Tue Mar 07, 2017 9:17 pm

Wow, that's a HUGE improvement there. Only thing I would point out is the the foot placement when he lands. Other than that, it's fluid and crisp with nice movement and poses. Very impressive.
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Re: ATTACK!

Postby Clever » Wed Mar 08, 2017 8:45 pm

Thanks for the comments, guys. Bump.
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