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Re: I'm dead.

Postby Silver » Mon Feb 06, 2017 9:26 am

You've improved a lot man Some good moves and good stuff keep doing, For the last animation for me the first punch seems weak try to add some strong poses to show he have charged the punch
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Re: I'm dead.

Postby Clever » Thu Feb 16, 2017 8:30 am

Bump. Thanks for saying that I've improved.
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Re: I'm dead.

Postby ZucchiniJuice » Sat Feb 18, 2017 5:10 am

nice job. Your newest animation that kick at the end could of used more bounce and easing to when the floor hit the ground tho.
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Re: I'm dead.

Postby Elixir » Sat Feb 18, 2017 2:19 pm

your "inactive rusty" combo looks better than all your others ones lol
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Re: I'm dead.

Postby Paperv » Sat Feb 18, 2017 10:21 pm

Dem kicks, so good!
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Re: I'm dead.

Postby Clever » Mon Feb 20, 2017 6:31 am

I fixed it, somehow. I kinda fucked up the landing tho.

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Re: I'm dead.

Postby Jojishi » Tue Feb 21, 2017 11:44 pm

I'm quite impressed with this newest one. You seem to be getting the hang of the snappy style and the 3D is sweet. The only issue is - as you've pointed out - the landing, which just has some minor shakiness.

It may help if you look at 1:33 of this tutorial. Also, going through the frames as you animate to check your spacing's consistent and doesn't jerk suddenly (the "<" and ">" hot-keys are very helpful here).
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Re: I'm dead.

Postby Clever » Sun Feb 26, 2017 3:36 am

thank you everyone
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Re: I'm dead.

Postby XElite109 » Sun Feb 26, 2017 11:34 pm

Hey man these combos are pretty sick!
I wish some of the transitioning was a bit clearer or smoother but they are sick.
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Re: I'm dead.

Postby Clever » Mon Feb 27, 2017 1:24 am

XElite109 wrote:Hey man these combos are pretty sick!
I wish some of the transitioning was a bit clearer or smoother but they are sick.


Heeey, you noticed me. I love your stuff and thanks (smile
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Re: I'm dead.

Postby batsu » Mon Feb 27, 2017 7:38 am

nice poses man
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Re: I'm dead.

Postby para nimo » Tue Feb 28, 2017 1:24 pm

ngl last time i saw you you were way worse than this. good job!
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Re: I'm dead.

Postby MrZenox » Wed Mar 01, 2017 2:20 pm

i can see better thing, like smooth and combos :D
omg i can't do a choregraphy like this, you are better than the last time and it the most important!
but try to make something original or long( i know i'm not the best to say that)
keep doing like this!
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Re: ATTACK!

Postby Clever » Thu Mar 02, 2017 7:43 am

Bumps
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Re: ATTACK!

Postby Clever » Tue Mar 07, 2017 2:08 am

Bump. New anim :D
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