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Re: Please love me.

PostPosted: Wed Dec 14, 2016 5:16 pm
by ZucchiniJuice
You're pumping out animations quite freuquently. Nice home boy. With your animations, I'd personally would slow down the movements a bit more and ease them for transition to action to action. Like have some weight shifting to anticipate that he'll move there or there. Basically have more anticipation between each action. Nice work overall though.

Re: Please love me.

PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2016 3:54 am
by Youngster
BUMP

Re: Please love me.

PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2016 2:13 pm
by Im3000
I don't think water moves like that!

Re: Please love me.

PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2016 4:36 pm
by Valkyn
The main part of the splash moves to the right while the dude executed a perfect vertical dive. The splash would be smaller and proportionate on both sides of the entry point.

Re: Please love me.

PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2016 7:45 pm
by Youngster
Oh okay. Thank you. My first time lol XD

Re: Please love me.

PostPosted: Sun Dec 18, 2016 6:33 am
by Youngster
Tried to fix it i think? Image

Re: Please love me.

PostPosted: Sun Dec 18, 2016 7:54 am
by Leo
Good anim m8.
Alright. What I can see is... That jump looks weak and out of range, it may hit his head on the edge.
2nd. The Splash looks less effect.

Re: Please love me.

PostPosted: Sun Dec 18, 2016 10:16 am
by Alexis
needs more easing and build up for that flip imo

Re: Please love me.

PostPosted: Sun Dec 18, 2016 11:10 am
by Youngster
Oh sorry. Being absent for a day can make me rusty.

Re: Please love me.

PostPosted: Sun Dec 18, 2016 5:54 pm
by Valkyn
You got the right idea with the splash though, good job. Just fine tune the spacing to make it look less rushed.

Re: Please love me.

PostPosted: Mon Dec 19, 2016 8:50 am
by Youngster
Here: Image

Re: Combo Copying Machine

PostPosted: Wed Dec 28, 2016 12:11 am
by Youngster
bump

Re: Combo Copying Machine

PostPosted: Wed Dec 28, 2016 3:48 am
by Valkyn
I would add an extra frame at the beginning and end of each movement, just to smooth out the spacing, yet keep the same snappy-style you have going on. It just looks kind of spastic right now.

Re: Combo Copying Machine

PostPosted: Mon Jan 02, 2017 3:39 am
by Reivans
can anyone teach me to make a good pivot animation

Re: I'm dead.

PostPosted: Mon Feb 06, 2017 7:06 am
by Youngster
BUMP!