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Re: I'm dead.

PostPosted: Mon Feb 06, 2017 9:26 am
by Silver
You've improved a lot man Some good moves and good stuff keep doing, For the last animation for me the first punch seems weak try to add some strong poses to show he have charged the punch

Re: I'm dead.

PostPosted: Thu Feb 16, 2017 8:30 am
by Youngster
Bump. Thanks for saying that I've improved.

Re: I'm dead.

PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2017 5:10 am
by ZucchiniJuice
nice job. Your newest animation that kick at the end could of used more bounce and easing to when the floor hit the ground tho.

Re: I'm dead.

PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2017 2:19 pm
by elixir
your "inactive rusty" combo looks better than all your others ones lol

Re: I'm dead.

PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2017 10:21 pm
by Vito
Dem kicks, so good!

Re: I'm dead.

PostPosted: Mon Feb 20, 2017 6:31 am
by Youngster
I fixed it, somehow. I kinda fucked up the landing tho.

Spoiler:
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Re: I'm dead.

PostPosted: Tue Feb 21, 2017 11:44 pm
by Jojishi
I'm quite impressed with this newest one. You seem to be getting the hang of the snappy style and the 3D is sweet. The only issue is - as you've pointed out - the landing, which just has some minor shakiness.

It may help if you look at 1:33 of this tutorial. Also, going through the frames as you animate to check your spacing's consistent and doesn't jerk suddenly (the "<" and ">" hot-keys are very helpful here).

Re: I'm dead.

PostPosted: Sun Feb 26, 2017 3:36 am
by Youngster
thank you everyone

Re: I'm dead.

PostPosted: Sun Feb 26, 2017 11:34 pm
by XElite109
Hey man these combos are pretty sick!
I wish some of the transitioning was a bit clearer or smoother but they are sick.

Re: I'm dead.

PostPosted: Mon Feb 27, 2017 1:24 am
by Youngster
XElite109 wrote:Hey man these combos are pretty sick!
I wish some of the transitioning was a bit clearer or smoother but they are sick.


Heeey, you noticed me. I love your stuff and thanks (smile

Re: I'm dead.

PostPosted: Mon Feb 27, 2017 7:38 am
by batsu
nice poses man

Re: I'm dead.

PostPosted: Tue Feb 28, 2017 1:24 pm
by matterkins
ngl last time i saw you you were way worse than this. good job!

Re: I'm dead.

PostPosted: Wed Mar 01, 2017 2:20 pm
by MrZenox
i can see better thing, like smooth and combos :D
omg i can't do a choregraphy like this, you are better than the last time and it the most important!
but try to make something original or long( i know i'm not the best to say that)
keep doing like this!

Re: ATTACK!

PostPosted: Thu Mar 02, 2017 7:43 am
by Youngster
Bumps

Re: ATTACK!

PostPosted: Tue Mar 07, 2017 2:08 am
by Youngster
Bump. New anim :D