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Wolfy's Thread

Postby Wolfy » Tue Nov 08, 2016 4:26 pm

Hi, i am Wolfy and these are my animations! Hints are welcome...

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Walk V2
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Sword
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Walk
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Kick
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Running Loop
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Last edited by Wolfy on Tue Nov 29, 2016 7:33 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: Wolfy's Thread

Postby andyzeke » Tue Nov 08, 2016 8:55 pm

Hello! Welcome to DDF! hope you enjoy it here. anyway

Your kick animation is really good, I like the 3d :P I do notice some shakiness near his legs tho. (He even looks like hes sliding backwards in 3d space)

Post more animations btw, its really hard to rank someone with only 2 animations, and hope to see more from you :P
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Re: Wolfy's Thread

Postby Wolfy » Mon Nov 14, 2016 8:15 pm

Update!
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Re: Wolfy's Thread

Postby Wolfy » Tue Nov 15, 2016 9:05 pm

New animations!
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Re: Wolfy's Thread

Postby Valkyn » Wed Nov 16, 2016 9:21 pm

I love the sword one, my god. The only thing I'd suggest is finishing the landing. It seemed abrupt and under-eased.
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Re: Wolfy's Thread

Postby elixir » Wed Nov 16, 2016 9:22 pm

pretty cool that u experimented with some 3d!
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Re: Wolfy's Thread

Postby Wolfy » Wed Nov 16, 2016 9:56 pm

Thank you for the tips! (grin
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Re: Wolfy's Thread

Postby Wolfy » Tue Nov 29, 2016 7:34 pm

Update! New walk animation...
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Re: Wolfy's Thread

Postby Youngster » Wed Nov 30, 2016 2:03 am

It looks good. But I think the hands and legs are stiff.
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Re: Wolfy's Thread

Postby Cavolia » Wed Nov 30, 2016 6:11 am

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Let me comment on this one because it has a pretty unique style.
The poses are somehow easy and pleasant to read, which surprises me because you distort the stk quite a bit. The movement really comes across even though the physics and and shapes might not be all that accurate. Keep this up.
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Re: Wolfy's Thread

Postby AnimationWizard » Wed Nov 30, 2016 1:54 pm

when you do your walks, think about this, when you walk, do you look like that? also when people run/walk they dont stay centered, they bob a little bit like a wave. like this:

Walk:
https://www.google.com/url?sa=i&rct=j&q ... 8349155226

Run:
https://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=ht ... mrc&uact=8

notice the wave their heads make, you can check my thread for a half way decent run if you need it
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