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My rank pls?

PostPosted: Fri Jan 06, 2017 12:50 am
by Defalt

I'm not very good in english, but please rate me

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Re: My rank pls?

PostPosted: Fri Jan 06, 2017 1:28 am
by elixir
med - high beginner, everything is powerless

anticipate more and have more follow through, believe it or not effects don't always add power

Re: My rank pls?

PostPosted: Fri Jan 06, 2017 2:03 am
by Defalt
Elixir wrote:med - high beginner, everything is powerless

anticipate more and have more follow through, believe it or not effects don't always add power



Yes, but to be honest, I'm not trying to make something powerful

Re: My rank pls?

PostPosted: Fri Jan 06, 2017 5:20 am
by matterkins
No power and those arms worry me.

Re: My rank pls?

PostPosted: Fri Jan 06, 2017 12:51 pm
by elixir
Defalt wrote:
Elixir wrote:med - high beginner, everything is powerless

anticipate more and have more follow through, believe it or not effects don't always add power



Yes, but to be honest, I'm not trying to make something powerful


to be honest that's kind of stupid

Re: My rank pls?

PostPosted: Sat Jan 07, 2017 12:23 am
by Defalt
Elixir wrote:
Defalt wrote:
Elixir wrote:med - high beginner, everything is powerless

anticipate more and have more follow through, believe it or not effects don't always add power



Yes, but to be honest, I'm not trying to make something powerful


to be honest that's kind of stupid


:c

Re: My rank pls?

PostPosted: Sat Jan 07, 2017 4:49 am
by Blademaster
so this animation is probably not about power... right ?
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just hold the pose and then when he charged up he releases the power with a big bang. That is how you animate power/anticipation. (thumbsup

also you got some nice stuff and seem to have some experience in the basics. Keep those up dude!

Re: My rank pls?

PostPosted: Sat Jan 14, 2017 6:37 am
by MrZenox
gud guy, you have understand the spacing but there is no anticipation, this stick is great, look's nice,
the head is a little weird, keep it up :)

Re: My rank pls?

PostPosted: Sun Jan 15, 2017 4:08 pm
by AnimationWizard
very good! but as everyone else has said, no anticipation and lack of power, if you get those down youll surely be high beg - inter