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Re: yoryo's thread

Postby MrZenox » Thu Mar 02, 2017 2:58 am

it seem boeardline inter to me,
just one thing that trust me, when the stk is kicking, the head isen't animated as well, but it's your style.
try something new, fullbody, background, original shit, new style, long animation.
and, ho, something else, look the pose at the end, i'm not sur if you can still get up in this pose xD.
Nice, keep it up!
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Re: yoryo's thread

Postby Jojishi » Sun Mar 05, 2017 3:36 pm

I agree that you seem borderline right now. The newest animation is great since you've improved the poses now and you've also spaced it well (good balance of easing and flow). Keep at it and I can see you getting moved up soon. :)
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Re: yoryo's thread

Postby yoryo » Sat Mar 18, 2017 1:11 am

update 18/3/17
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Re: yoryo's thread

Postby Zaaz » Sat Mar 18, 2017 6:42 am

Your newest animation looks really good, the movements look intermediate to me, although it is a bit short. Only thing I can spot is that the camera movement should've followed him a bit more in the end so his head doesn't stick out of the animation, aside from that the camera movement was on point, really good job!
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