TheDarkDemon

Hi, my name is Harry. You can call me what ever you want *wink* Any ways, I'm new to the site and a bit familiar with pivot (1-2 years) I'm not very good, because I never showed anyone therefore I could never get constructive criticism. So I would just like a bit of help from people with more experience.

Personaly, i think we don't need other comment to improve, but that animation is'nt bad too :p
i see anticipation and basic effect, you need to learn spacing and easing.
i recomend you to see this video from Jojishi, that might help you: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FM8YKMOyfu4
welcome to the forum King Red ^^