Lg59 to DON [Jul 8,2017]

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Re: Lg59 to DON [March 23,2017]

Postby DON » Fri Mar 24, 2017 6:59 am

Raymond wrote:Your DBZ animations are very detailed, I like the full bodies (I'm not sure if you made them), but you have a lot of potential. If you iron out some of the shaky parts [really there aren't that many in your recent animations] you could easily reach vets.


I made them. :) it's actually here viewtopic.php?f=27&t=4556
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Re: Lg59 to DON [March 23,2017]

Postby Blademaster » Fri Mar 24, 2017 8:13 am

Oh man. I love your stuff.

The dancing one is my favorite.
You put great effort in most of your animations and as raymond already said, that is what shows off your potential.

In my opinion you're intermediate.

Keep animating bro. :)
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Re: Lg59 to DON [March 23,2017]

Postby Raymond » Fri Mar 24, 2017 5:10 pm

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So I'm a little disappointed. Mat pointed out that your dance animation looks rotoscoped and it wasn't hard to find this video, which is identical to it. I've done this in the past and kept it hidden from people, so I'm not going to bash you for it. You haven't necessarily lied about it yet, but you didn't mention it was rotoscoped. We don't frown upon rotoscoping because it's another form of learning, but we ask that you let us know if you do because it's easier to trace an animation then it is to create one completely on your own and it can affect the ranks here. It's also not really fair to others who climbed the ranks legitimately.
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Re: Lg59 to DON [March 23,2017]

Postby DON » Fri Mar 24, 2017 8:33 pm

Raymond wrote:So I'm a little disappointed. Mat pointed out that your dance animation looks rotoscoped and it wasn't hard to find this video, which is identical to it. I've done this in the past and kept it hidden from people, so I'm not going to bash you for it. You haven't necessarily lied about it yet, but you didn't mention it was rotoscoped. We don't frown upon rotoscoping because it's another form of learning, but we ask that you let us know if you do because it's easier to trace an animation then it is to create one completely on your own and it can affect the ranks here. It's also not really fair to others who climbed the ranks legitimately.


I understand, I already point this out to Chris and Jojishi when i showed them the animation..
I won't deny that it is from that animation, and i'm alright if you bash me about it. I just didn't thought about sharing it because i thought it was kinda out there.. so yeah i'll edit that in a moment. I May have left the wrong impression. sorry.
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Re: Lg59 to DON [March 23,2017]

Postby DON » Sun Apr 16, 2017 9:24 pm

3 Part Joint With DarkAngel & Lucyo Mikoto (From AllPivoters)
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1st Part - Jan 2017
2nd Part - Feb 2017
3rd Part - March 2017
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Re: Lg59 to DON [March 23,2017]

Postby MrZenox » Mon Apr 17, 2017 5:57 am

HEY! it's look good! but why all time DBZ?
it's kinda weird but fullbodys is awesomes and there is good ideas! keep doing like this Don ^^
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Re: Lg59 to DON [March 23,2017]

Postby dilz9015 » Sat Apr 22, 2017 8:43 am

that DDC13 stars part was exciting! o3o
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Re: Lg59 to DON [March 23,2017]

Postby DON » Sun Apr 23, 2017 11:29 am

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Re: Lg59 to DON [April 24,2017]

Postby Jojishi » Wed Apr 26, 2017 2:47 pm

With the combo animation, the choreography is nice and some of the poses looked good.

What seems to be holding you back is that everything happens so fast that it feels like a flurry of punches and kicks. There's no moment for the guy to catch his breath. Also, everything is spaced big where small spacing might be more appropriate. Try to slow down some of your movements a lot and ease more. It might feel unnatural at first but I promise that you'll see a huge improvement by doing this. Tldr; space smaller and ease more.
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Re: Lg59 to DON [April 24,2017]

Postby DON » Wed Apr 26, 2017 5:30 pm

The animation was Purely Rush, i wanted to see how it would turn out, if i do the same thing i used to do before, (usually with less anticipation).
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Re: Lg59 to DON [May 15,2017]

Postby DON » Sun May 14, 2017 5:57 pm

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Re: Lg59 to DON [May 22,2017]

Postby DON » Mon May 22, 2017 4:45 pm

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Re: Lg59 to DON [May 22,2017]

Postby Bullzeye » Mon May 22, 2017 10:46 pm

... ... ... ... u are FU****G awesome man. the first thing i say after seeing all this is "woah"! i can see a bit of shakiness here and there which dont even seem to be there until u arent focusing good enough. u are ready to go inter man, i guess they should send u to inter, or did i by mistake enter to the inters, no it isbeginners
great job man, keep it up!
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Re: Lg59 to DON [May 28,2017]

Postby DON » Sat May 27, 2017 3:06 pm

May 28
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Re: Lg59 to DON [May 28,2017]

Postby Hypo » Sat May 27, 2017 3:33 pm

DON wrote:Image


Man I love this, even though it's short and it's not fullbody, I think it's the strongest anim you have in your thread when it comes to poses/timing/moves (basically the basics [heh])
It feels a bit shaky but a good kind of shaky, you know? Kinda adds some realism to the anim... I just really dig this style you've been developing with the basic stickfigures. Keep at it ^^

Also, great work on your fullbodies, the animation suffers a little bit in terms of flow and smoothness but it's still very detailed.
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