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yo

PostPosted: Tue Feb 07, 2017 2:11 am
by x43

Re: yo

PostPosted: Tue Feb 07, 2017 2:35 pm
by FireBind
I like theese camera movements, but animation is too mutch fast, i almost cant even see theese movements.

Re: yo

PostPosted: Tue Feb 07, 2017 7:22 pm
by x43
Update:
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Re: yo

PostPosted: Wed Feb 08, 2017 1:26 am
by FireBind
x43 wrote:Update:
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I cant see the image

Re: yo

PostPosted: Wed Feb 08, 2017 1:27 am
by FireBind

Re: yo

PostPosted: Wed Feb 08, 2017 6:55 pm
by Jojishi
The new one has an old-school feel to it that I like. The zooming-in part was bad-ass and the movements looked good at the start. However, it was a bit stiff at the end when the movement stopped suddenly, so it could be better with easing applied there.

Re: yo

PostPosted: Wed Feb 08, 2017 10:41 pm
by x43

Re: yo

PostPosted: Thu Feb 09, 2017 6:36 pm
by Jojishi
The newest looks good, especially at the start, but making the movements stop abruptly doesn't look as good. I don't know if you're trying a particular style or breaking the rules to be unique, but you need to get the fundamentals down before trying something complex like that. When your animations look good it's High Beginner. Ease more, space consistently, keep at it and you'll see major improvements.

Re: yo

PostPosted: Sat Feb 11, 2017 12:03 am
by x43
update 3:

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Re: yo

PostPosted: Sat Feb 11, 2017 2:58 am
by FireBind
x43 wrote:update 3:

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I can recommend read some tutorials in this section: viewforum.php?f=25

Re: yo

PostPosted: Sat Feb 11, 2017 9:06 am
by Echo
I think you are doing great you just have to work on actually making the movement more detailed, you have good animations but they lack that detail and focus on the movements, I think you could make great content if you took more time on every move you do.
Check some more animations from higher ranks and check the tutorial section from time to time and you'll be great.
Keep it up !

Re: yo

PostPosted: Sat Feb 11, 2017 3:45 pm
by x43
spent a little more time on this combo:
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Re: yo

PostPosted: Sat Feb 11, 2017 10:47 pm
by x43
bump with new animation


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Re: yo

PostPosted: Sun Feb 12, 2017 5:03 pm
by x43
rank? // update

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Re: yo

PostPosted: Sun Feb 12, 2017 5:39 pm
by elixir
LOL WHATS HE DOING