Wars anims

[Warlords]

Hello there,

My name is Tom, 21 years old, currently working as web developer and I've been around the pivot/flash community since 2008. Stopped animating on a regular basis in 2013 but stopped by every now and then.

Latest Pivot

piv v2

old Version
(.piv)


Latest Flash
http://sta.sh/0qwgfnume2v

Pivots
http://orig00.deviantart.net/503d/f/201 ... b3utxz.gif
http://orig03.deviantart.net/715e/f/201 ... b3uu71.gif


A comprehensive flash of my pre 2015 animations:
http://sta.sh/0rrxy38qs5y

Old Thread:
viewtopic.php?f=18&t=533

[TθPS]

Welcome back, the latest animation is very cool even with the weird easing.

[zweeble]

sick
@Tops620 thats his style

welcome back

[Blademaster]

welcome back dude. Good to see you around. still that super random style. :P

is funny to watch ^^

[Warlords]

Welcome back, the latest animation is very cool even with the weird easing.

Thanks but

Leave my easing alone ;_;

sick
[...]
welcome back

welcome back dude. Good to see you around. still that super random style. :P

is funny to watch ^^

Thanks pal,
appreciate the feedback. Let's hope the rank team gets used to that style quick enough

Also updating with a short flash-animation
http://sta.sh/0qwgfnume2v

[zweeble]

nutty
one thing I noticed was that the limbs (especially the back) changed its length extremely at some parts, try to avoid it if its not "actual" 3D

[Blademaster]

with the animation quality you provide right now you won't hit intermediate.

Your choice of poses is too random and the animations are quite quick. Better get some practice and try do develope the style.

[Warlords]

with the animation quality you provide right now you won't hit intermediate.

Your choice of poses is too random and the animations are quite quick. Better get some practice and try do develope the style.

Well I can do smooth animations with realistic poses but I don't particulary enjoy this style. I chose not to do too much like that since I personally don't like animating it. If that's the only way to get ranked up, maybe it's not worth the effort


(.piv)

[Zaaz]

His right leg is very shaky, aside from that I feel like the kick looks pretty clean, although you could've finished the movement.

[Warlords]

His right leg is very shaky, aside from that I feel like the kick looks pretty clean, although you could've finished the movement.

thanks for the feedback. Did that... Just for you

piv v2

[Zaaz]

That looks a lot better! The only thing I can point out is that he snaps back pretty fast after the kick, the spacing seems irregular from the rest, but good job taking in what i said. :)

[zweeble]

This animation looks flawed overall, you might redo the poses completely imho

theres also a missing build up to the kick

[Blademaster]

Bonebreaking spinkick. Literally bonebreaking... if you want to I can send you some combos I've animated via PM.

[Valkyn]

You've got the right idea there, but as Blade said, it's bone breaking. His top half spins one way, and the other half moves the opposite way. If you look at the top half alone, the kick should move counterclockwise to match the body.