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Postby DBZPIVOT » Mon May 15, 2017 4:01 pm

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Re: DBZ

Postby Tops620 » Tue May 16, 2017 6:26 am

The animation is great, i would say you are an intermediate
anyway, i saw that you've allready made a thread in beginners hall, next time if you had a new animation, edit this thread and add the animation here, if you want this thread to be on top, just simply reply it.
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Re: DBZ

Postby matt meh » Tue May 16, 2017 11:05 am

it looks great but the ending looks really weird to watch. Other than that, tops is right.
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Re: DBZ

Postby Bullzeye » Fri May 19, 2017 4:31 am

woah, new dbz sticks, i wanit i wanit i wanit!
can u pls send them to via pm, pls pls pls pls!
okay, coming back to the animation... ... ... ZAMASU IS NOT STRONGER THAN GOKU!
anyway, taking the animation as one, there are a bit of spacing issues like when goku flipped to make a blind kick, his other leg came in too fast, probably bcuz of the simple flip usage, but that is a spacing issue. u broke zamasu's arm, u should take care about the anatomy of a person. goku's head looks a bit shaky, it would have been great if zamasu had hit the back of goku's head rather than going for the cheeks. also when zamasu punched goku, by moving the frame towards the direction of the punch rather than opposite to it, it wouldnt look as odd as it does now.
u very well depicted the way zamasu would be while fighting goku with his poses in the start and in the end as well as the desperation of goku to defeat him in such a short animation. loved it!
looking forward for the sticks as well, pls send them, pls pls pls!
it sure would be high beginner to med high thing, confirmed!
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