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Postby DBZPIVOT » Thu May 18, 2017 8:35 pm

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Re: Rank?

Postby Meh » Thu May 18, 2017 8:51 pm

Tops620 wrote:next time if you had a new animation, edit this thread and add the animation here, if you want this thread to be on top, just simply reply it.

please do what he said and read the Forum Rules
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Re: Rank?

Postby ~Raymond » Thu May 18, 2017 9:35 pm

Your animation has good spacing but it seems as though you ease your movements to a halt before starting in a different direction. This can create what they call a stop -n- go feel to the animation which isnt always pleasant to see. Instead of stopping the motion path, it should gradually decrease and then increase in the other direction.I would suggest experimenting with different kinds of movements and figure out how to make a stickfigure change directions without stopping and without him doing it too fast.

Edit: Now that I watch your animation again, It doesn't really look stop n go at all..... Well my bad
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Re: Rank?

Postby Bullzeye » Fri May 19, 2017 1:19 am

i really liked the thing that guy did in the end after winning! that kick seemed a bit odd though, he kicked black upwards but black went horizontal.
it is nice overall, keep animating!
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Re: Rank?

Postby Fleance » Fri May 19, 2017 10:13 am

TL;DR, work on not using effects to show power/shakiness/reactions to hits

All in all, it was a decent little animation, the final reaction of the black stick was strange how he flew off the screen; Those effects aren't helping much. I think it would look a lot better if you removed the black blinking screen and the white on hit flash. Making the animation flow much more as well as the shakiness of each hit. Try to show power without the use of effects and your future attacks with effect will be a lot more powerful.

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Re: Rank?

Postby DBZPIVOT » Fri May 19, 2017 10:19 am

Thanks ^^
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