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My First Pivot Animation

Postby IceNinja49 » Sun May 21, 2017 12:44 pm

I Think I Have IMproved Alor So Far Thx For The tips.
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Re: My First Pivot Animation

Postby some nooby animator » Sun May 21, 2017 8:52 pm

im no expert for animation but the body is quite stiff
I see you looked at my signature (insert lenny here)
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Re: My First Pivot Animation

Postby Fleance » Sun May 21, 2017 9:27 pm

TL;DR, work on all the basics of movement/ look at tutorials.

for your first animation, this is very good, compared to my first you're ahead of the game.
Things that are wrong: Stiffness, spacing, pretty much all the basics. I can't accurately judge your skill or what is wrong because the animation is a loop of a simple walk. Post something with more complex movements and I will CNC much more effectively.
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Re: My First Pivot Animation

Postby Bullzeye » Mon May 22, 2017 1:11 am

i have nothing to say about the animation. i was just making ur man jump on my screens using the scroll.
u should keep the dimensions at 640:360 or in the ratio of 16:9 but not too big and post it to a site named imgur, get the share link and copy the bbcode here.
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Re: My First Pivot Animation

Postby Silver » Mon May 22, 2017 2:09 pm

it's shaky
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Re: My First Pivot Animation

Postby IceNinja49 » Tue May 23, 2017 1:22 am

Thank You guys For The Feed Back. I Have A Couple of new Animations That Ive Made So Far.
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Re: My First Pivot Animation

Postby Bullzeye » Wed May 24, 2017 11:26 pm

u should certainly have a look at some some tutorials. u are a newbie, so the start would be to read a bit about animating. do some reading, practice them, and then make some animations and post them here, u will be medium beginner immediately. we will certainly give some cc then, and that would be something that would help. if i was to write about the basics of animation here, it would become really difficult for u to understand cuz i would make it bare minimum for someone to just start doing it but of course it would be done incorrectly. so go and read it in full detail! if u feel like u have a problem, pm someone who is ready to help.
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