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What happens next will shock you

Postby todor05 » Wed Sep 13, 2017 1:57 pm

https://imgur.com/a/Ast7R
here's my first run, it's not really anything special, but I'm open for CNC (cheesygrin
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Re: What happens next will shock you

Postby isettox » Thu Sep 14, 2017 5:07 am

the upper body is ok i suppose, a little stiff but practice overall will kind of iron it out
the legs in particular is what makes ur run not look as good, the back leg is always too far forward, and during the part where he kicks off the ground, his leg should be a little more aligned with the body, like:
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idk im not good at cc much ;b
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Re: What happens next will shock you

Postby todor05 » Sun Sep 17, 2017 5:08 am

isettox wrote:the upper body is ok i suppose, a little stiff but practice overall will kind of iron it out
the legs in particular is what makes ur run not look as good, the back leg is always too far forward, and during the part where he kicks off the ground, his leg should be a little more aligned with the body, like:
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idk im not good at cc much ;b

Yeah, now I noticed that, thanks guy
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