Well, i think that your rank its Low Beg. The animation is so fast and shaky, the zoom at the first escene looks weird, the auras are good, the beams looks a little weird and the fluity its ok. keep practising ;)
You are Low Beg but if you want to improve, I think you should concentrate first on the movements of the sticks, and then on effects. Although you are not so bad. Keep animating!