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What do you think about these animations ?

Funny
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8%
Entertaining
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24%
Creative
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49%
Original
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11%
Inspiring
2
5%
Deep
0
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Other (with explaination in the thread, thanks)
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3%
 
Total votes : 37

Re: Animtations

Postby Cressel » Sat Jul 12, 2014 2:06 pm

Hey that was pretty nice! I'm really liking your style. Your movements are pretty floppy though, try to make your sticks look more solid, your posees are also off at times, they look either cluttered or weird.

Other than that your animations are really good. Super entertaining and just pretty well done. Keep it up!
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Re: Animtations

Postby Anton » Fri Jul 18, 2014 4:27 am

Bump : I posted my FFA entry, guys.
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Re: Animtations

Postby Extra » Fri Jul 18, 2014 7:39 am

good you pwned Handyman
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Re: Animtations

Postby SuperNoob » Fri Jul 18, 2014 10:51 am

You have a very interesting style. I would love to see more. Really enjoyed the KD vs. Handyman.
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Re: Animtations

Postby The Black Mamba » Fri Jul 18, 2014 12:19 pm

Great job man, I liked this. Your movements were good but a little stop and go, as always. You're definitely improving though. Although lazy, the effects were pretty comical. The background was........meh, you could have at least specified where the ground was. I really like some of your character's moves, like the circle blade he threw at the beginning. The hand imitating thing midway through the animation was a little weird. Don't know if that's one of his moves or not but it wasn't as well executed as it should have been. It looked as if two arms popped up behind Handyman but then KD just takes them, it makes it look like it wasn't intended to be your characters move (Don't know if it was suppose to be). The angles you implemented were nice and helped add a little bit of cinematic feel to the animation, though the ending wasn't very eventful. Too sudden. Good job on this and I hope to see more from you in the future.
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Re: Animtations

Postby Anton » Fri Jul 18, 2014 12:42 pm

Thanks, it means so much.

The gray-ish hands were the arms that were cut off from the handyman in the beginning. It wasn't planned at all and became KD's main advantage.
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Re: Animtations

Postby Lord » Fri Jul 18, 2014 1:59 pm

This is great, man! The setting is good, movements are okay too, (could have been eased and have better smoothness but the power makes up for it). Your sprites are good, I like the frisbee, it was cool. I'm not sure what those grey things you had on you when you were flying,

It kept me entertained, and that's what an animation is meant to do? Isn't it?
Great job on this!
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Re: Antoniasmi

Postby Anton » Sun Aug 31, 2014 10:19 am

As the juke collab failed, it's time to show my entry.

Rushed a lot in this one, but at least it's something ... right ?
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Re: Antoniasmi

Postby Lord » Sun Aug 31, 2014 10:48 am

Yeah, it definetly shows that you rushed it, the quality of the animation was not very good.
I loved the ideas you have in it though. :)
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Re: Antoniasmi

Postby tuna » Sun Aug 31, 2014 12:02 pm

hah man I love your work, it's always so creative and fun to watch :)
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Re: Antoniasmi

Postby Chris » Sun Aug 31, 2014 12:13 pm

Am i the grey stick?
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Re: Antoniasmi

Postby Anton » Sun Aug 31, 2014 12:19 pm

Every stick is anyone if they want (except the red guy of course), i just loved putting a lot of sticks in a loop. (razz
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Re: Antoniasmi

Postby Clusive » Sun Aug 31, 2014 11:50 pm

Shouldn't this be in the intermediate section?

(It's good. Like, very good)
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Re: Antoniasmi

Postby Cheese » Mon Sep 01, 2014 11:27 am

It's good, but not intermediate good.
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Re: Antoniasmi

Postby The Specter » Mon Sep 01, 2014 11:37 am

Anton your stuff is really good but I just feel like I'm watching a slide show. Why not raise the FPS and add some more frames in, while keeping your style?
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