Angry Stick - The ghost of bald

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Angry Stick - The ghost of bald

Postby StickAli » Tue Aug 21, 2018 3:43 am

Any feedback ? suggestion?
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https://youtu.be/LGzJHkz2274
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Re: Angry Stick - The ghost of bald

Postby Aymunz » Fri Aug 24, 2018 8:00 am

That was very entertaining and eye-catching (that damn ghost xD).Nice work man :)
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Re: Angry Stick - The ghost of bald

Postby tuna » Fri Aug 24, 2018 11:22 am

i really enjoyed that man. the animation was super expressive, and you made sure that every scene and action was clearly presented, leaving enough time in each scene for the audience to follow the story. keep making more! if you want to improve the animation quality, try looking up tutorials on 'the 12 principles of animation' , which will help your characters have a more believable and smooth movement to them.

but yea its great to see a original animation like this. its one of the first pivot animations ive seen recently that made me want to actually comment on it. keep up the good work dude
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