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The jump was a bit sudden and the follow through with the flip was hard to see...
and the landing was just like weak... work on those things man you seem to have a creative mind !
unlike me ... :P keep working and you will improve .

Kirin wrote:The jump was a bit sudden and the follow through with the flip was hard to see...
and the landing was just like weak... work on those things man you seem to have a creative mind !
unlike me ... :P keep working and you will improve .

Thanks for your advice. What do you think of this?

Warlordsftw wrote:

Kirin wrote:The jump was a bit sudden and the follow through with the flip was hard to see...
and the landing was just like weak... work on those things man you seem to have a creative mind !
unlike me ... :P keep working and you will improve .

Thanks for your advice. What do you think of this?

That was the animation i was referring to XD.

^yeah I tried to correct it. Compare it to the other one lol

Building off of Kirin, there needs to be more bending before the jump, or at least have the flip lower. The build up to the flip should also have the arms either way behind him, or over his heads (for a front flip) in order to generate the torque needed to initiate the flip's angular momentum. The arms should only then come back to the body when hes in the air

The landing on the second one is great. However, the start is kinda off. When someone jumps, they spring into the jump, they don't simply lift their feet and boom they're in the air. I think you should make his knees contract before the initial jump.

I am sure , that the only thing wrong with that is the lack of easing at most parts .
That was really good .

check it out

rank?

Not a fan of double framing, but it seemed med-high beginner. The ragdolling kinda sucked, and seemed a bit stiff. And you can hardly tell the dude kinda like stomped on the last guy. But everything else was fine.

I agree with Madness on the double-framing. It's alright to convey power and proper timing in some instances, but this fight is fast-paced; the double-frame only disrupts the flow.

Also, the third stick doesn't seem to abide by the same laws of physics as the rest. His limbs so no reaction to the stomp and falls flt as a pancake.
I really liked the dodge of the first kick. Pretty entertaining fight.

Hope this helps and to see more from you.