Kirin animations- My first animation after a year hiatus

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Re: Kirin animations- Running loopy

Postby Kirin » Wed May 14, 2014 10:10 pm

The Specter wrote:Dude that recent one was super fluid. Definitely inters and Im sure that if you make something longer, it would get you there,



Wow thank you so much man.
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Re: Kirin animations- Quick one

Postby Anton » Thu May 15, 2014 3:20 am

I can't see the images anymore, it says "account suspended"

I want to see that interz quality before my own eyes. (sad
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Re: Kirin animations- Quick one

Postby Kirin » Thu May 15, 2014 7:06 pm

Fixed it ... sorry about this guys .
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Re: Kirin animations- Quick one

Postby Kirin » Fri May 23, 2014 11:43 pm

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Re: Kirin animations- Quick one

Postby socks » Sat May 24, 2014 9:00 pm

Posing and Spacing are off on certain animations and the most recent one is a bit short for a proper judging, it looks close to intermediate, close but you're getting there.

Pivot points one was pretty great though, keep that up and maybe you'll get a move-up!
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Re: Kirin animations- Quick one

Postby Eaglet » Sun May 25, 2014 4:18 am

I think that PP animation is really good, man. I don't like the first reaction of the fatter guy, though. It looks stiff or something, but I'm not sure. In general I love your style. I think you need to work on spacing the most. And maybe you should ease more. Otherwise really nice animations.
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Re: Kirin animations- Quick one

Postby Kirin » Sun May 25, 2014 4:52 pm

Thanks guys ! I'll keep working on it .
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Re: Kirin animations- Goku makes a come back!

Postby Kompressor » Wed Jun 04, 2014 12:30 am

I really like your animations... you seem SO close to intermediate but I think your spacing can come off a bit too heavy a times and can just come off looking a bit weird and stiff occasionally. Just make something long and you'll be fine.
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Re: Kirin animations- Goku makes a come back!

Postby Eloste » Wed Jun 04, 2014 6:12 am

The animations are actually really good. Smooth and such. And I really love the Goku figures! I guess you're at around Med-High Beginner?
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Re: Kirin animations- Goku makes a come back!

Postby The Specter » Wed Jun 04, 2014 10:57 am

You handled those effects really well, and the motions were very smooth for the most part. Pretty much on par with everything else you've made, nice.
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Re: Kirin animations- Goku makes a come back!

Postby Cheese » Wed Jun 04, 2014 4:47 pm

There's alsways been something I like about your style, and those effects look awesome
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Re: Kirin animations- Goku makes a come back!

Postby The Black Mamba » Wed Jun 04, 2014 6:07 pm

I love that you used my sticks man. I like your style, it's very unique. The transformations were entertaining and you used the effects pretty good. I really think you could be intermediate if you make something long and entertaining. Keep it up!
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Re: Kirin animations- fire jab

Postby Kirin » Sat Jun 14, 2014 6:36 pm

Thanks alot guys

I am gonna get intermediate soon I know it .

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Re: Kirin animations- fire jab

Postby thebiscotticakeman » Sat Jun 14, 2014 8:44 pm

well your animation lacked flow in fighting but the fire effect was really good +1

your very close to inter's from the looks to it and im not even close there :(
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Re: Kirin animations- fire jab

Postby Kirin » Sun Jun 15, 2014 12:19 am

Thanks a lot ! :D I'm definitely gonna use it in the future .
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