Kirin animations- My first animation after a year hiatus

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Kirin animations- My first animation after a year hiatus

Postby Kirin » Mon Apr 28, 2014 11:22 pm






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Re: Kirin animations

Postby The Specter » Mon Apr 28, 2014 11:58 pm

Good to see you here! That second one looks really nice and the first one, the only problem that I can see is what valtus (I think) already pointed out about him not running on the ground but I dont see how thats tooo much of an issue. Cant wait to see more!
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Re: Kirin animations

Postby Kirin » Tue Apr 29, 2014 12:07 am

yeah having trouble posting stuff right now .

Thanks for sharing the link to this place .
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Re: Kirin animations

Postby tuna » Tue Apr 29, 2014 1:24 am

Hey I remember you!
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Re: Kirin animations

Postby Swaikha » Tue Apr 29, 2014 3:52 am

Nice animations :)

You're not Kyrin are you?
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Re: Kirin animations

Postby Anton » Tue Apr 29, 2014 6:15 am

That's a really good animation. Close to interz level.

The movements are chaining eachother with a good flow, however the 3-4 last frames are not as good, maybe that's why you stopped here, thus making a short anim.

It's strange that the ground has moved vertically, without drawing any line to help the viewer noticing that.
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Re: Kirin animations

Postby Kirin » Wed Apr 30, 2014 6:24 pm

Tuna wrote:Hey I remember you!


You do ?
Did you have another name ?

Anyway thanks guys !
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Re: Kirin animations

Postby Erif » Wed Apr 30, 2014 8:38 pm

that's pretty nice, but I think it all happened a little too fast. If you coulda taken the time to define the movements a little, it would have looked a lot better. Nice job tho.
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Re: Kirin animations

Postby The Black Mamba » Thu May 01, 2014 3:19 am

Your style reminds me of Tuna's for some reason. Your newest was pretty good, kind of short though. The flow of the animation was consistent, which I know is hard to maintain, so good job. The movements were pretty smooth and it was entertaining. Maybe make something longer, I like your style man.
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Re: Kirin animations-sword

Postby Kirin » Fri May 02, 2014 5:26 pm

Update : sword practice .
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Re: Kirin animations-sword

Postby Extra » Fri May 02, 2014 5:28 pm

He should not really run that fast, that would make the animation look better. :3
Still pretty nice movenments. c:
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Re: Kirin animations-sword

Postby Kirin » Fri May 02, 2014 5:46 pm

Extra wrote:He should not really run that fast, that would make the animation look better. :3
Still pretty nice movenments. c:


Your right it is a bit fast ... (smile
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Re: Kirin animations-sword

Postby Reverence » Sat May 03, 2014 12:41 am

I think you should smooth out those sword swifts, they seem a bit jerky to me.
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Re: Kirin animations- fight short

Postby Kirin » Sat May 10, 2014 11:42 am

Thank you man for the cc.
More CC please.
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Re: Kirin animations- Running loopy

Postby The Specter » Wed May 14, 2014 9:57 pm

Dude that recent one was super fluid. Definitely inters and Im sure that if you make something longer, it would get you there,
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