Azrael thread - Beginner

[Azrael]

Yo everybody, Azrael here, i've made my first stick (well, not a stick, more my name :1)

http://imgur.com/4LXJnvE


What you guys think?



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Animations:



Spidey

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Red VS Blue

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Suicide Blade

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BOOM!! HEADSHOT

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INVISIBLE NOT VISIBLE

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New sig stick test(Credits Sifter for awesome stick)

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Atom Robot test (Credits for Waffles Mgee)

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Guns test (Thanks Waffles Mgee for guns, awesome man)

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That's it, :D

[Chris]

Nice animations

[Kirin]

Well I like your stuff but I think you should work on the basic.

[Azrael]

Thanks guys, i'll try my best on everything, actually now, i'm making my signiture stick, could someone give me an link to any thread about sig. stk making? :D

[Reverence]

I'd say you're still low-beg.

I think your best animation is the spidy one, the webs are well done. However, his body is stiff throughout the animation.

[Azrael]

Thanks everybody, i'll try my best on the body thing :D

[Azrael]

C'mon, where is everybody?

[Leo]

Still animating the FFA of course.

[Azrael]

What's FFA? XD

[Anton]

FFA is Free For All
It's explained in this topic.
viewtopic.php?f=26&t=349

People are using their best stickmen to wreck eachother in fierce battles.
Round 1 will be finished soon. (i can't wait !!)

And some short comentaries :


Balance broken, spacing of the 2 firsts punches irregular, and the ground punch is nice.
The beginning is well done, but it goes bad after that, take your time to edit.


The darker hand is very stiff (it's the cons of using intricated sticks), and the head is choppy.
The blade attack is not powerful enough, you have to increase the spacing at the end of the movement, and follow through after.

Keep on refining the basics, Low-med beginner.

[Azrael]

Thanks, i'll keep praticating the basic :D

[Azrael]

Tem algum BR por aqui? :p

[Kirin]

You are very adventurous with you animations man ! :D

I like that.

[Azrael]

Wow, thanks, i really like you animations, i'm like a fan \o\o\.