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Crafty - L.O.V.E [Preview]

Postby Crafty » Sat May 10, 2014 12:02 pm

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Re: Dendi's Thread

Postby Axon » Sat May 10, 2014 12:03 pm

it looks nice so far but it's so short, continue it
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Re: Dendi's Thread

Postby Jojishi » Sat May 10, 2014 7:43 pm

That looks nice, but I agree that it's short. It looks a little floppy for a punch. Some anticipation, like putting his arm behind him, would add more power to the animation. Right now it looks like he just raises his arm up. It's got some nice smoothness to it though.
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Re: Dendi's Thread

Postby Reverence » Sat May 10, 2014 8:21 pm

What is he doing? It looks like he's done with everything, and he's just like "fuck it".
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Re: Dendi's Thread

Postby Warlordsftw » Sun May 11, 2014 1:41 am

Dendi wrote:Please let me know where and how to improve :)
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Danylo?
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Re: Dendi's Thread - Pivot Punch Test

Postby Crafty » Sun May 18, 2014 10:56 am

New animation.
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Re: Dendi's Thread - Pivot Punch Test

Postby socks » Sun May 18, 2014 11:20 am

Dendi wrote:New animation.
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Make something more than 70 frames, with that quality.
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Re: Dendi's Thread - Pivot Punch Test

Postby Crafty » Sun May 18, 2014 11:26 am

Stripes wrote:
Dendi wrote:New animation.
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Make something more than 70 frames, with that quality.


That is quite allot. But I will try the next time I'm in the mood to use Pivot Animator again. (thumbsup
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Re: Dendi's Thread - Pivot Punch Test

Postby Bullzeye » Fri May 23, 2014 5:26 am

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Re: Dendi's Thread - Run Through Wall

Postby Crafty » Sun Nov 09, 2014 6:58 am

Un update guys :)
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Re: Dendi's Thread - Run Through Wall

Postby Lord » Sun Nov 09, 2014 7:00 am

Your movements are smooth and clearly understandable, your poses are also pretty accurate.
Make a longer animation, with more content so you can be judged a bit better.
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Re: Dendi's Thread - Run Through Wall

Postby Four » Sun Nov 09, 2014 7:47 am

Wow nice animations man.
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Re: Dendi's Thread - Run Through Wall

Postby Cheese » Sun Nov 09, 2014 5:43 pm

I love your spacing
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Re: Crafty - Crafty+Tol+Flame+Sifter Joint

Postby Crafty » Tue May 10, 2016 9:28 am

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Re: Crafty - Crafty+Tol+Flame+Sifter Joint

Postby Luka. » Tue May 10, 2016 10:02 am

Hey! You're from PA right? Really nice animations, your spacing is interesting and overall fun to watch!
Keep it up!
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