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Postby MrGreen » Sat May 31, 2014 9:01 am

Hello guys after 1-2 years I return to pivot this is my first animation since 2 years soo I dont think it is one of the best :D
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Edit:I might add a wall.
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Postby Cheese » Sat May 31, 2014 9:55 am

You did really good with the foot placement, although the animation has a bit of stop and go kinda look to it.
Try to work on your flow, this meaning make sure all your joints move in a curve, those arms are lacking flow, and a few other parts I cant make out, but for your first anim in 2 years nice job ^-^
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Postby MrGreen » Sat May 31, 2014 9:56 am

Thanks for the comment will try to work it out :3
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Postby Reverence » Sat May 31, 2014 2:52 pm

Well it's nothing too sophisticated. The arms look a bit awkward when he lunges forward, I'd say move the farthest arm a little closer to the lower arm. Foot placement was good.
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