I am Zlatan

[QueenElsa]

Don't play with a Ladder * Second Animation * (I haven't animated in a while cause of lack of inspiration and I had a random idea, will be doing some saw traps soon)









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[Luka.]

Welcome to The DarkDemon. Nice of you for leaving the shitbag A.net. That animations looks good. The problem is the 2 guys on the front, they look a bit stiff and when they land from the jump, their feet should be at the same place as at the start. The run was fabulous. Nice job man, keep it coming. ;3

[Juke]

Welcome to TDD man. I hope your nose isn't as big as Zlatan's!
The animation is nice, but the there is no depth shown, the ball doesn't get smaller as it moves away from the screen (towards the goal). The further something gets from the screen, the smaller it gets..So it looks like the ball just moves left and not towards the goal, but keep it up man.

[QueenElsa]

I don't know about my nose but I know my ears are pretty big :)
Any thank you both for commenting this is my second animation
so far, I will try and fix the problems you both introduced and post it later.

[QueenElsa]

Update

[Lord]

How random. :)
When the ladder fell on the stick I felt that he should have reacted differently. You know, like bouncing with the pressure of it.

[hellothisiskan]

Hey man! Maybe, you can try animating the ladder swinging along slightly back and forth as the stickman swings on it. It'd make the animation more believable I think. I know you were trying to go for comedic timing but I think it'd be better if there wasn't such a long pause before the ladder fell, maybe start the ladder falling 3 frames just after swings off but have it start really slow and slam down hard with a little bounce.

[Bullzeye]

from my side u need to work on gravity