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Re: Intermediate Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby elixir » Tue Jan 17, 2017 8:32 pm

i like you combo
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Re: Intermediate Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby Echo » Wed Jan 18, 2017 3:50 pm

Elixir wrote:i like you combo


I agree with Lixerir, It's really cool tho the last two kicks could have been spaced better maybe try smoothing them out more, looks kinda rushed.
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Lithium wrote:Enjoyed that, how about making one with a huge boulder chasing a dude. I reckon you'd be really good at something like that. (thumbsup (thumbsup
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Re: Intermediate Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby Rix-Sama » Fri Jan 20, 2017 3:43 am

Hype (thumbsup
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Re: Intermediate Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby Echo » Sat Jan 21, 2017 2:49 pm

Rix-Sama wrote:Hype (thumbsup
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I as a run animator really enjoy that (heart
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Lithium wrote:Enjoyed that, how about making one with a huge boulder chasing a dude. I reckon you'd be really good at something like that. (thumbsup (thumbsup
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Re: Intermediate Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby elixir » Sat Jan 21, 2017 3:17 pm

Echo wrote:
Rix-Sama wrote:Hype (thumbsup
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I as a run animator really enjoy that (heart


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Re: Intermediate Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby -Y- » Sat Jan 21, 2017 11:51 pm

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testing again.
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Re: Intermediate Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby Euclid » Sun Jan 22, 2017 5:28 am

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testing again.

Nice one. I feel like there's so much power that could be expressed more with more exaggerated poses. Speaking of which, I feel like you're getting all of the power from the arms which is a big no-no. Power comes from the rest of the body and that can be accomplished through proper poses. I also have a hard time distinguishing which arm does the punching which is very confusing. One method is to pose your figure such as that both of their arms are very separated so that they can be distinguished. And another method is for you to add shoulders to the stickman. Also that uppercut needs some work. Either you crouch the figure so that the power comes from the whole body acting like a spring from crouching and then sort of "jumping" upwards while putting the attack into it, or you pull the arm way back so it follows an upwards arc ultimately landing into the opponent's chin or something like this:
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see how I added shoulders so that you are able to distinguish which arm is punching and how I did that uppercut?


or idk really. Just my 2 cents.


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Re: Intermediate Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby Echo » Thu Jan 26, 2017 10:58 am

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speaking of combos


This looks really nice but the kick at the very end looked really fast, maybe make the leg go back down slower, it just seemed too fast, spacing was not the greatest on that. Also the last reaction of the default looked really low quality compared to the rest of the animation, maybe make it look stronger than the ones before since the default had already taken some punches and kicks, he got punched in the chest and just took a step back... space the reaction out more, pretty sure it would look better.
Hope it's not too hard to read, I'm tired.
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Lithium wrote:Enjoyed that, how about making one with a huge boulder chasing a dude. I reckon you'd be really good at something like that. (thumbsup (thumbsup
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Re: Intermediate Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby The Black Mamba » Thu Jan 26, 2017 9:06 pm

10/10 u used my sig <3
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Re: Intermediate Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby Echo » Sat Jan 28, 2017 11:10 am

Hey guys just found an old anim I made.
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I was lurking in the old DD, there are so many good memories..
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Lithium wrote:Enjoyed that, how about making one with a huge boulder chasing a dude. I reckon you'd be really good at something like that. (thumbsup (thumbsup
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Re: Intermediate Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby Blademaster » Sat Jan 28, 2017 11:55 am

nice Mustache. (scool
his dual wielding skills need some work tho. :P

yeah you can still find some good old shit on animator.net.
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Re: Intermediate Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby SIFTER » Sat Jan 28, 2017 12:41 pm

back when you were good (cry
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Re: Intermediate Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby Echo » Sat Jan 28, 2017 12:59 pm

Sifter wrote:back when you were good (cry


As if I was good lmao
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Lithium wrote:Enjoyed that, how about making one with a huge boulder chasing a dude. I reckon you'd be really good at something like that. (thumbsup (thumbsup
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Re: Intermediate Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby -Y- » Sat Jan 28, 2017 6:02 pm

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Re: Intermediate Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby Euclid » Sun Jan 29, 2017 1:41 am

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trying to animate on 24 fps on 2s
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