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Re: Ray / Crh123's Thread : Me Beating up Rank Team

PostPosted: Fri Dec 26, 2014 6:35 am
by tuna
hey man that actually looked really nice. i'd just like to say a few things about poses and such though.
small attacks (jabs, lead hand attacks, lead foot attacks) are snappy
big attacks (rear leg attack, rear hand attack) a followed through

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what im trying to say is the movement of the arm after he's punched didn't look right

what you've done:
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eeeeeewwwwwwww

Re: Ray / Crh123's Thread : CC Please

PostPosted: Sun Jan 25, 2015 4:36 am
by Ray
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Re: Ray / Crh123's Thread : CC Please

PostPosted: Sun Jan 25, 2015 10:49 am
by Will
The momentum in this animation is thrown off by how little the default moves. Having it spring back to its original position after a hit means the attacking stick has to stop and dump all his speed from the run. This is also accentuated by the tremor you used because the stick moved backwards for a frame. This results in the jump kick looking powerless.

The spinning kick was rather impressive however, and the action stance with some small footsteps was a good idea. Nice job.

Re: Ray / Crh123's Thread : CC Please

PostPosted: Sun Jan 25, 2015 11:45 am
by Aron
The default stk's reaction really brought down the quality of the animation. Nice job overall though.

Re: Ray / Crh123's Thread : CC Please

PostPosted: Sun Jan 25, 2015 12:19 pm
by Franklin
I think it would be a bit better if the default stick tilted as it was hit and didn't just pop back into place. I think it is usually fine to use the default stick as a static target, but when you do it needs to be able to come off the ground or get knocked over. The spinning kick was pretty cool, though.

Re: Ray / Crh123's Thread : CC Please

PostPosted: Sun Jan 25, 2015 2:29 pm
by Ray
Thanks for your comments guys, just trying to get some basics of fighting down.

Re: Ray / Crh123's Thread : CC Please

PostPosted: Sun Oct 04, 2015 2:43 pm
by Ray
Long time no see ppls. This was my BBODD entry but I kinda lost inspiration and plus it isnt that good anyway..
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Re: Ray / Crh123's Thread : CC Please

PostPosted: Sun Oct 04, 2015 3:33 pm
by Lord
Lol, how long ago was that
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Nice animation nonetheless. Stiff movements, but I was always the same. :)

Re: Ray / Crh123's Thread : Back Kek

PostPosted: Mon Oct 05, 2015 4:56 pm
by Ray
I might continue this and make it something longer or some shit like that... idk.

back kek
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Re: Ray / Crh123's Thread : Back Kek

PostPosted: Mon Oct 05, 2015 6:00 pm
by SIFTER
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what type of fuckery were you trying to pull there? lol. Else, generally, the best part of the whole animation is the jump as it's had just the right amount of anticipation and air time. What really bothers me is how weak the reaction and poses are which ought to be exaggerated. Exaggerated spacing for the reaction from one hand, and exaggerated poses on the other.

Re: Ray / Crh123's Thread : Harry Penis

PostPosted: Tue Oct 06, 2015 9:17 pm
by Ray
Lol, yeah there were some technical difficulties there.

Btw, im actually gonna make that harry potter project I was talking about that long time ago.... just testing some more things out.
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Somebody move me up already!! :3

Re: Ray / Crh123's Thread : Harry Penis

PostPosted: Tue Oct 06, 2015 10:42 pm
by Llama
was expecting a hairy penis. sorely disappointed.

Pretty nice stuff, man, especially after such a long time away.

One thing that bothers me is that when the figure walks over, his entire upper body, save for the arms, is stiff as a board; when he stops walking, it's like his spine suddenly remembered how to move and shows a little bit more dynamism. Just try to move every joint following the flow of movement so that it doesn't look awkward. The glasses also wobbled a lot initially, but you smoothed it out near the end, so that's a plus (grin

Re: Ray / Crh123's Thread : Harry Penis

PostPosted: Tue Oct 06, 2015 10:54 pm
by Cheese
Make your project, and I'll make my own, we can move up together.

Re: Ray / Crh123's Thread : Harry Penis

PostPosted: Wed Oct 07, 2015 1:15 am
by Ray
Cheese wrote:Make your project, and I'll make my own, we can move up together.


ur on m8.

And yeah llama, that's how I get ya. (y)

Re: Ray / Crh123's Thread : How I got Intermediate

PostPosted: Tue Oct 13, 2015 8:10 pm
by Ray
Since everyone is saying that its actually good...

Btw, thanks for all the people who commented positive things on that freestyle thread <333

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