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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Fishing Rod, Spoons and Cookies Com

Postby Four » Sat Nov 29, 2014 8:27 am

That was great man. I think you're one step away from inters :D
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Fishing Rod, Spoons and Cookies Com

Postby Amir » Sat Nov 29, 2014 8:59 am

One thing: Slow it down!!!
Otherwise pretty good job. Keep working on spacing a little, your poses are becoming a lot better though.
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Fishing Rod, Spoons and Cookies Com

Postby SharpBeast » Sat Nov 29, 2014 9:05 am

Talk about extra creativity :D
Very good animation. Those Iron cookies XD
When gray one had idle anim his knees seemed a bit shaky but that could be just me..
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Fishing Rod, Spoons and Cookies Com

Postby Lord » Sat Nov 29, 2014 10:46 am

People were saying in the Halloween Special to do away with the static sticks when they're not doing anything. So I tried my best at it, thanks for all the comment guys.
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Postby Echo » Sat Nov 29, 2014 11:53 am

Pretty much Intermediate man... I have no idea why you aren't.
Good job on the newest animation.
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Postby Ray » Sat Nov 29, 2014 1:41 pm

Woah man thats really good. You've gotten a lot better. Keep on animating (thumbsup
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Fishing Rod, Spoons and Cookies Com

Postby Mori » Sat Nov 29, 2014 2:18 pm

Nice idle!
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Fishing Rod, Spoons and Cookies Com

Postby tuna » Sun Nov 30, 2014 3:21 am

huge improvement man, just watch how the key poses flow together because the poses in-between look sorta weird but the key poses look fine (key poses being the one's that the stickfigure rests on and in-between poses are when he's moving)
the spacing is a bit stop and go, gotta make spacing consistent, remember rules about momentum and such.
some bits could be a little more eased, like when the two grey stickfigures start running (at the beginning), they're from 0-top speed in about 2-3 frames which is too fast (remember rules about inertia)
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Fishing Rod, Spoons and Cookies Com

Postby Lord » Sun Nov 30, 2014 6:26 am

Alright, thanks for the comment guys, I'll keep in mind inertia, stop and go, and poses in the Christmas Special, I'll try make it the animation to make me interz, if not that the Star Wars animation. Thanks. :D
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Fishing Rod, Spoons and Cookies Com

Postby Amir » Sun Nov 30, 2014 7:25 am

LordPivot wrote:Alright, thanks for the comment guys, I'll keep in mind inertia, stop and go, and poses in the Christmas Special, I'll try make it the animation to make me interz, if not that the Star Wars animation. Thanks. :D


Don't forget about the speed as well. Some parts in the animation were really fast, like to much. But you're good man, really close to be interz.
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Fishing Rod, Spoons and Cookies Com

Postby Kirin » Sun Nov 30, 2014 12:21 pm

Damn! That a pleasant surprise.
Nice work on that one.
The guy farthest to left was too fast on the attack.
Other than that I was great!

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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Fishing Rod, Spoons and Cookies Com

Postby PinkPivot » Mon Dec 01, 2014 8:58 pm

A bunch of these have shitloads of potential, but you're so fucking lazy sometimes. No offense.
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Postby Grams » Mon Dec 01, 2014 9:02 pm

I see my spoons were effective. Awesome job, man. This was really entertaining.
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Fishing Rod, Spoons and Cookies Com

Postby Daniël » Mon Dec 01, 2014 9:35 pm

That was pretty cool man, but I'm a bit disappointed in the creativity within the use of the weapons. I mean, it's cool to make an animation with all these things, but I would have liked it a lot better if you added some more snazzy moves in the animation.
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Fishing Rod, Spoons and Cookies Com

Postby Lord » Tue Dec 02, 2014 4:06 am

Daniël wrote:That was pretty cool man, but I'm a bit disappointed in the creativity within the use of the weapons. I mean, it's cool to make an animation with all these things, but I would have liked it a lot better if you added some more snazzy moves in the animation.

I had it all sorted out for the Fishing Rod but only had a vague idea for the spoons and cookies. By the time I got to the cookies I was beginning to get 'lost'.

Thanks for all these comments guys, I'll be sure to be less lazy for my Christmas Special PinkPivot. :)
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