FourAcross Thread: Ghost Sword

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Re: FourAcross Thread: Dinkiest Update

Postby Four » Sat Dec 26, 2015 5:41 am

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Re: FourAcross Thread: Obstacle Course Update

Postby Four » Wed Dec 30, 2015 4:39 am

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Re: FourAcross Thread: Obstacle Course Update

Postby Paperv » Wed Dec 30, 2015 5:33 am

Ayy looks cool mate, that sexy bouncy <3 ooh.
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Re: FourAcross Thread: Obstacle Course Update

Postby Sifter » Wed Dec 30, 2015 1:40 pm

Being frank, I don't think there is anything necessarily wrong with what you've got in your obstacle course animation so far. There is a good degree of fluidity in the movements, the timing is rather okay, and the poses are pretty appealing. The bit of criticism I could provide you with at this point would be about the very start and the very end; the anticipation seems to be pretty slow and the bit of easing you've added at the jump made it feel floaty. I think that you could have made him bounce from the start to get the necessary vertical momentum to make it to the trampoline. Also, exaggerating poses is necessary. Accentuate your poses so that things get to be clearer. At the very end, I'm not sure if you made him bend his legs the opposite way on purpose because it just looks wrong to me. Making him bend his legs normally should easily fix it. These two flaws are insignificant as the animation already looks pretty good as is.
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Re: FourAcross Thread: Obstacle Course Update

Postby Gary » Wed Dec 30, 2015 2:33 pm

i completely forgot this course existed, heh. i liked it, but i wish there was more to the animation
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Re: FourAcross Thread: Obstacle Course Update

Postby Husky » Sat Jan 02, 2016 6:57 pm

We need something new like that.
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Re: FourAcross Thread: Obstacle Course Update

Postby Gary » Sat Jan 02, 2016 7:24 pm

Jack wrote:We need something new like that.


We do, its called the Chaos Course and it's better than any of the other courses I've made
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Re: FourAcross Thread: Obstacle Course Update

Postby Husky » Sat Jan 02, 2016 9:23 pm

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Jack wrote:We need something new like that.


We do, its called the Chaos Course and it's better than any of the other courses I've made

but, rather than, say, a joint, it would be like a competition like that one was.
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Re: FourAcross Thread: Obstacle Course Update

Postby Gary » Sun Jan 03, 2016 2:09 am

Jack wrote:
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Jack wrote:We need something new like that.


We do, its called the Chaos Course and it's better than any of the other courses I've made

but, rather than, say, a joint, it would be like a competition like that one was.


Eh, alright, I'll think about creating a new course
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Re: FourAcross Thread: Obstacle Course Update

Postby Tuna » Sun Jan 03, 2016 6:21 am

i keep forgetting your not inters and it grimbles my grumble. the moveup thread that was made for you hasnt been voted on enough because RT need to get their shit together. it was made about a month ago and has been bumped once or twice to get more votes on it but nobody is voting on it.
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Re: FourAcross Thread: Obstacle Course Update

Postby Tuna » Sun Jan 03, 2016 12:26 pm

congrats, the staff have voted you for inters :)
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Re: FourAcross Thread: Obstacle Course Update

Postby Gary » Sun Jan 03, 2016 12:48 pm

welcome to inters m8, congrats
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Re: FourAcross Thread: Obstacle Course Update

Postby Husky » Sun Jan 03, 2016 12:54 pm

Ayy, congrats Four! You really deserve it.
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Re: FourAcross Thread: Obstacle Course Update

Postby Flame » Sun Jan 03, 2016 1:13 pm

The prophecy is complete.
Congratulations.
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Frank Thomas and Ollie Johnston - The Illusion of Life: Disney Animation
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Richard Williams - The Animator's Survival Kit:
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12 Principles of Animation summarized
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Aaron Hartline and Victor Navone, animators at Pixar Animation Studios and mentors at Animation Mentor, discuss timing and spacing tips and tricks
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Re: FourAcross Thread: Obstacle Course Update

Postby Prometheus » Sun Jan 03, 2016 1:51 pm

Flame wrote:The prophecy is complete.
Congratulations.

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