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Re: Mori's Animations: Fun with extra

Postby Daniël » Sat Jan 24, 2015 9:36 am

This actually looks like I'd imagine Steffen fighting.
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Re: Mori's Animations: Fun with extra

Postby Extra » Sat Jan 24, 2015 9:42 am

Daniël wrote:This actually looks like I'd imagine Steffen fighting.


try me faggot (heart

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Re: Mori's Animations: Fun with extra

Postby Four » Sat Jan 24, 2015 9:44 am

I rather like this GJ man.
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Re: Mori's Animations: Fun with extra

Postby Mori » Sat Jan 24, 2015 1:58 pm

FourAcross wrote:I rather like this GJ man.


Why the fuck this ""rather"", that means that I'm a fucking loser, SHIT
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Re: Mori's Animations: Fun with extra

Postby Four » Sat Jan 24, 2015 1:59 pm

Mori strikes again.
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Re: Mori's Animations: Fun with extra

Postby Mori » Sat Jan 24, 2015 2:00 pm

FourAcross wrote:Mori strikes again.


I'm fucking done with you.

(thumbsup Mat likes this
(thumbsdown Daniël dislikes this
(thumbsup Koolcid Got off to this
I'm too lazy to get my member link, but Caleb too
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Re: Mori's Animations: Fun with extra

Postby Lord » Sat Jan 24, 2015 2:49 pm

No! Your thread is quickly gaining comments, only my thread can be the only persons thread with the most comments. Do you hear me?

me...
me...

ME!

*cough* *cough*
sorry, had a rant there, but now that that's over...
your animations are actually getting very good, very quickly. Keep up the good work. ;)
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Re: Mori's Animations: Fun with extra

Postby Mori » Sat Jan 24, 2015 2:50 pm

LordPivot wrote:No! Your thread is quickly gaining comments, only my thread can be the only persons thread with the most comments. Do you hear me?

me...
me...

ME!

*cough* *cough*
sorry, had a rant there, but now that that's over...
your animations are actually getting very good, very quickly. Keep up the good work. ;)


Thanks a lot man, that's the comment. xD
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Re: Mori's Animations: Rookies at PA

Postby Mori » Sun Jan 25, 2015 8:25 am

Rookie!!!
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Re: Mori's Animations: Rookies at PA

Postby tuna » Sun Jan 25, 2015 10:28 am

them stolen effects
that stolen style

yeah not bad nice poses
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Re: Mori's Animations: Rookies at PA

Postby Franklin » Sun Jan 25, 2015 6:19 pm

Congratulations on rooks, man. You definitely deserve it.
I like the effects and movements for the most part, but many of those attacks needed a bit more anticipation.
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Re: Mori's Animations: Rookies at PA

Postby Ray » Sun Jan 25, 2015 6:27 pm

Nice. I like it.
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Re: Mori's Animations: shit

Postby Mori » Fri Jan 30, 2015 6:46 am

BUMP NIGG
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Re: Mori's Animations: shit

Postby Franklin » Sat Jan 31, 2015 10:48 pm

That new animation feels very HBomb for some reason. Its probably the base and run cycle.
CnC wise: I suggest that you try falling and bending your leg under yourself. Yeah. Hard, isn't it? The final pose, in my opinion, should probably be more like this:
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- There is weird choppiness in the arms throughout the animation.
- His butt (haha butt) and hands, trying to break his fall, should also probably hit the ground first.
- Try adding more bounce to his fall.
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Re: Mori's Animations: shit

Postby Aron » Sat Jan 31, 2015 11:01 pm

Root wrote:That new animation feels very HBomb for some reason. Its probably the base and run cycle.
CnC wise: I suggest that you try falling and bending your leg under yourself. Yeah. Hard, isn't it? The final pose, in my opinion, should probably be more like this:
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- There is weird choppiness in the arms throughout the animation.
- His butt (haha butt) and hands, trying to break his fall) should also probably hit the ground first.
- Try adding more bounce to his fall.

That looks like what one of HBombs first animations looked like.
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