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Re: FlameSosej's Thread!

Postby Raymond » Thu Apr 28, 2016 9:09 am

The movements are nice, but I'm more impressed with the effects. The explosion and the fire look great!

Edit: I just realized me and Juke commented on your older animation. The jump looks good, but it looks like it could use a few more frames. Maybe you could show him swing his arms behind his back before he jumps so there is some anticipation.
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Re: FlameSosej's Thread!

Postby Rix-Sama » Sun May 01, 2016 6:43 pm

huehue when u gon git inters m8?
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Re: FlameSosej's Thread!

Postby FlamingSosej2732 » Tue Jun 21, 2016 1:17 pm

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Newest to the top and oldest to the bottom! Don't get confused this time!


when am i gonna get interz? If i see the sentence "Make longer anims" I'll find you and slowly peel your skin until you look like a miniature colossal titan!
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Re: FlameSosej's Thread!

Postby Pop » Tue Jun 21, 2016 1:36 pm

Make......Longer.......Animations... lol I like your newest one but i can't rank you besides say that your a high beginner
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Re: FlameSosej's Thread!

Postby Finom » Tue Jun 21, 2016 2:13 pm

There's something about this that seems very flash-like. Great stuff you have
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Re: FlameSosej's Thread!

Postby elixir » Tue Jun 21, 2016 2:26 pm

that animation looks pretty sick so far, finish it tho idk why u didn't finish it
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Re: FlameSosej's Thread!

Postby Vito » Wed Jun 22, 2016 6:46 am

Holy fucking shit. Finish it dude!
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Re: FlameSosej's Thread!

Postby Lithium » Thu Jun 23, 2016 9:25 am

Hehe nice job. Good work with the generic spacing but y'no, it's kind of boring like a medicore type of ani y'no?

Your easing is like l-l--l-----l--l--lll--

See how it's broken and the rhythm is kind of wonky? It should be more fluctuating and rejuvenating for the eyes coz the rank team doesn't like your style of progress.

This is more like it i--i-----i------i--i--i-----i---i-- (See the difference ;)? Fluctuating and progression really emphasizes key continuiation)

But don't fret, potential is there. I like your newest ani, it had nice effects but your nowhere NEAR my level. If you want to show off then do so outside of dd, coz the rankteam doesn't appreciate show offs trust me. They banned my friend after i got caught in class throwing paper planes at the teacher XD hehe.

But back on main point, your style sucks, and you need to update your ani more and flow the movements. The easing is good but not good enough for the rank team hehe XDXD! Trust me the rank team like smooth easing and fluctuating progressive content XD.

nice work but add more lines and smoothness in every frame rate per minute. hehe xD

low med -high borderline, almost there but not quite XD
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Re: FlameSosej's Thread!

Postby Pop » Thu Jun 23, 2016 10:09 am

I like all of them in my opinion but i do agree with Lith
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Re: FlameSosej's Thread!

Postby Blademaster » Fri Jun 24, 2016 10:01 am

Hey man.

Actually you're already intermediate in my eyes.

The newest one was really original and I loved how you used the transparent stick. Also the 3D run was super b.
That was great work.

Most of your shorts are super smooth and look really decent, it's just sad that you kept them so short or that you rendered the gif in quite high fps.

Anyways, one more update and I'll create a move up thread for you.
Amazing stuff. Keep that up man :)

Courtesy? (=response to my thread with cc/a short comment)

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Re: FlameSosej's Thread!

Postby XElite109 » Fri Jun 24, 2016 11:01 am

dude thats some epic looking shit reminds me of something h-bomb would kinda do but cooler
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Re: FlameSosej's Thread!

Postby FlamingSosej2732 » Wed Jun 29, 2016 5:56 pm

Another short anim...
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Re: FlameSosej's Thread!

Postby elixir » Wed Jun 29, 2016 10:31 pm

its actually very good, make more pls
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Re: FlameSosej's Thread!

Postby FlamingSosej2732 » Fri Jul 01, 2016 9:34 am

Anotha wun!
Remember newest to the top and oldest to bottom!
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Re: FlameSosej's Thread!

Postby Ray » Fri Jul 01, 2016 12:04 pm

All of your animations just cut off right after things pick up. I think a good thing to do would be to stick to one animation and see it through completely. Even if its as short as a combo animation.
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