Lasky's Thread - [20-06-2017]

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Lasky's Thread - [20-06-2017]

Postby Lasky's » Fri Dec 26, 2014 1:45 am

Hello, I am Lask, and this is my thread. : D

I was inactive one year and 1 day again... haha
but i dont stopped of work in my projects :p
This time i show my better anims recentlys (:P
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Re: Lasky's Thread - [25-12-2014]

Postby Jojishi » Fri Dec 26, 2014 8:18 am

Hi Lasky. I moved your thread from the Anonymous section to Beginners Hall. If you want to post in Anonymous you'll have to sign out of your regular account. When you go to the Anonymous section you'll be asked for the password where you'll enter it in. Then you should be able to post a topic as a guest. The point of the section is to post anonymously so that people won't know it's you. It's not usually used for threads.

Your animations are quite nice. A lot better than I expected actually. I'm guessing you've been animating for quite a few months at the very least. I can't give much advice really, because I can see that you've got a good understanding of easing and some basic grasp on flow. I think all you've got to do is just keep practicing and trying new things, and as always, have fun doing it.

I will say that on the top animation, the kick attack doesn't seem clear enough. It still looks okay and works with the momentum you had going, but the pose is hard to see. I think if you slowed down the momentum a bit before the kick it would look better. Basically, ease the entire body after he is pushed, then ease back to the right where he kicks out, then ease back in the other direction where he runs off the screen. This way, you also get a change of direction in the spacing which gives more power. Change of direction to display power is a hard thing to grasp even for lots of Intermediates so it's ok if you don't understand what I'm saying at this point. Just try to make your attacks clearer by slowing down when needed.

But other than that, great job. I think you've got loads of potential.
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Re: Lasky's Thread - [25-12-2014]

Postby Anton » Fri Dec 26, 2014 8:46 am

Hi, did you came from some unknown forum or what ? I can't imagine someone getting that good without any kind of exterior advices/help. oO
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Re: Lasky's Thread - [25-12-2014]

Postby Leo » Fri Dec 26, 2014 9:08 am

Whoa. Those movements are sweet and flow less.
The first anime is great. The impact is so cool and the beat down of the maroon guy.
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Re: Lasky's Thread - [25-12-2014]

Postby Mori » Fri Dec 26, 2014 1:00 pm

This is really inters!
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Re: Lasky's Thread - [25-12-2014]

Postby Amir » Fri Dec 26, 2014 1:08 pm

You got some pretty nice moves in your "best animation" just the effects were too simple and the double framing is pretty unnecessary, not just in that one, in all of them. Other than that, you're pretty good.
I think you're an Intermediate tbh.
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Re: Lasky's Thread - [25-12-2014]

Postby Pulse » Fri Dec 26, 2014 1:42 pm

Dude. I think you deserve a move up.
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Re: Lasky's Thread - [25-12-2014]

Postby orange joe » Fri Dec 26, 2014 1:54 pm

i dont' your poses are bs
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Re: Lasky's Thread - [25-12-2014]

Postby Lasky's » Sat Dec 27, 2014 10:44 pm

Still can not raise me to intermediate ?, Or I have to do more to see my rank?
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Re: Lasky's Thread - [25-12-2014]

Postby Jojishi » Sat Dec 27, 2014 10:54 pm

I think you're quite close to Intermediate, but you're going to have to make some more animations before you can seriously be considered.
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Re: Lasky's Thread - [25-12-2014]

Postby socks » Sat Dec 27, 2014 11:56 pm

Tuna wrote:i dont' your poses are bs

How did you get rank team?

Poses are off, sure, but the quality of the animation is at Intermediate without a doubt to me.
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Re: Lasky's Thread - [25-12-2014]

Postby Daniël » Wed Dec 31, 2014 6:42 am

You make some dope shit.
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Re: Lasky's Thread - [25-12-2014]

Postby Caleb » Wed Dec 31, 2014 7:31 am

I actually don't think you're quite intermediate. You should work on making clear poses each frame so that your fast style comes out a bit nicer. You're pretty decent though, just keep animating and you'll be there pretty soon. Just get a little bit of the niches in spacing and you're there.
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Re: Lasky's Thread - [25-12-2014]

Postby Aron » Sat Jan 03, 2015 9:20 am

Caleb wrote:I actually don't think you're quite intermediate. You should work on making clear poses each frame so that your fast style comes out a bit nicer. You're pretty decent though, just keep animating and you'll be there pretty soon. Just get a little bit of the niches in spacing and you're there.

Yes. Razo's style was fast like that, but he had clear and exaggerated poses so we could see the movements easily.
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Re: Lasky's Thread - [25-12-2014]

Postby Lasky's » Thu Jan 08, 2015 2:01 am

Lel, I did not understand anything, I'm confused. xD

But Thanks to all (? XD

But then, Update, Intermediate Is?
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