~Sasuke's Thread [HUGE Update]

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Re: ~Sasuke's Thread [HUGE Update]

Postby Cressel » Sun Mar 13, 2016 1:07 am

I'm p sure I had seen some of those before. I'm not too much into skateboarding so I'm not too sure on what's right and what's not but the stick's center of gravity seems off while he's just standing on the skateboard. Also remember that you need to exaggerate movements a little in order to make everything that's happening clear.

The doors animation is alright, some poses feel weird. Mainly when he takes a step back after stabbing that guy, the way he holds the sword just feels awkward. Animating weapons is probably one of the harder things to make look natural, you just need to keep in mind how the movement is done and be able to capture the poses correctly, keeping in mind little details like wrist movements to complete the swinging, the wrist itself makes the sword move like 90 or a little more degrees so it's really important to keep in mind.

The naruto animation has really weird pacing overall. some scenes are slow and boring, the action is too quick and scenes end too quickly, it's just not pleasant if you ask me. try to make the scenes have synergy, make the buildup worth the follow up, if he takes 5 seconds just to prepare that attack, make the attack and follow ups last like 10 seconds or something, when he charges the chidori for like 3 seconds and just wastes it in less than one second is kind of a bummer.

tldr; try to familiarize with not so common poses, animation pacing and overall subtle movements to be clear.
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Re: ~Sasuke's Thread [HUGE Update]

Postby Mori » Sun Mar 13, 2016 4:34 am

wow nice you changed your name, nice anims make more.
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Re: ~Sasuke's Thread [HUGE Update]

Postby tuna » Sun Mar 13, 2016 4:46 am

this is very much inters man why are you in beginner
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Re: ~Sasuke's Thread [HUGE Update]

Postby Lord » Sun Mar 13, 2016 6:27 am

A lot of this stuff does luck inters, with a few exceptions. :P
I'd be considering a move-up, maybe. :/
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Re: ~Sasuke's Thread [HUGE Update]

Postby TheBimmer231 » Sun Mar 13, 2016 6:50 am

he used my sticks, make him elite naw !
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Re: ~Sasuke's Thread [HUGE Update]

Postby Blademaster » Sun Mar 13, 2016 7:03 am

The skateboard animation was my favorite one! Great stuff. You can actually see that you've made improvements over the last animations.

Kratzle already pointed out quite a lot already. Make sure you make use of his CC.
In my opinion you're almost ready to make the next step.

Great animations. :)
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Re: ~Sasuke's Thread [HUGE Update]

Postby tuna » Sun Mar 13, 2016 3:06 pm

congrats the staff voted you for inters :)
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Re: ~Sasuke's Thread [HUGE Update]

Postby Euclid » Sun Mar 13, 2016 3:20 pm

Congrats man!!!
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Re: ~Sasuke's Thread [HUGE Update]

Postby Raymond » Sun Mar 13, 2016 3:32 pm

Congrats on intermediate! The new animations look great!
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Re: ~Sasuke's Thread [HUGE Update]

Postby Mori » Sun Mar 13, 2016 3:36 pm

Gratz galaxy... (wink (wink
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Re: ~Sasuke's Thread [HUGE Update]

Postby Horsie » Sun Mar 13, 2016 4:15 pm

Congratz (thumbsup (thumbsup (thumbsup (thumbsup
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Re: ~Sasuke's Thread [HUGE Update]

Postby Cheese » Sun Mar 13, 2016 4:42 pm

congrats dude, my favorite is that kendama one, looks really nice
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Re: ~Sasuke's Thread [HUGE Update]

Postby ~Sasuke » Sun Mar 13, 2016 7:05 pm

I was actually surprised because I went to go look at my thread to see if anyone else had posted cc and couldn't find it. Then I was completely blown away when I saw that my thread had been moved here. This is literally what I've been aiming for, and I appreciate everyone who helped me get here as well. I'll be sure to continue to advance my skills. I currently have something in the works that's at almost 2K frames, so keep an eye out for that.
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Keoy Joint: 65 Frames
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Re: ~Sasuke's Thread [HUGE Update]

Postby -Y- » Sun Mar 13, 2016 8:14 pm

Rlly nice animations...your style is very...nice xD (I not speak English). Congrats >:D!!
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Re: ~Sasuke's Thread [HUGE Update]

Postby ~Sasuke » Sun Mar 13, 2016 10:06 pm

Thanks man. Back to animation related things, I think I'm going to make a parkour/ freerunning (whatever you want to call it) type of animation. I've managed this so far:
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So yeah, that's not much but it's a start. other than that I have little projects here and there.
P.S. whoever changed the size of my signature, thanks. didn't realize it was too big, so thank you for taking the time to fix it, lol.
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