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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Milkman, The First Drop

Postby tuna » Wed Aug 26, 2015 12:21 pm

dude, by far your best animation so far. really nice job man :)) movements need a bit of work but i dont think thats important for this animation, its entertaining all the same :)

did anyone see the post-credits scene?
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Milkman, The First Drop

Postby Lord » Thu Aug 27, 2015 10:18 am

Yeah, I was wondering who stuck around to see it, I made it in 1 day. :)
Thanks for the comment, Tuna.
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Milkman, The First Drop

Postby Jojishi » Fri Aug 28, 2015 12:54 am

I liked this one a lot. Long, entertaining and had an interesting story to it. I think the quality is a bit of a step down from Star Wars - Part 2, which I thought had excellent movements and 3D and was bordering on Intermediate if you wanted a rank for that.

With this one I felt the attacks looked a bit too snappy and choppy. I think just tone down the snappiness and it should look improved. Also, there was one 3D scene with the purple guy running away with the camera angle behind him. He should have got smaller as he ran away but he didn't, so it look weird when he went over the horizon.

Other than that I thought the rest was cool. There was one good 3D part at the start with the Milkman's hat and I liked the close-ups and backgrounds in those first scenes.

I respect that you want to make entertaining animations. I honestly feel first and foremost that that's the most important quality to an animation. While quality is undeniably a vital aspect, at the end of the day I just want to be entertained and no matter how realistic a movement is, if it's just on a white background I'd prefer something that has more to it - something with a story to tell, nice backgrounds, camera angles and a lot of movement/action to keep things entertaining.

I enjoyed this animation a lot and I also saw the end credits scene. The way you had the scenes flow kept it interesting and mysterious. I'm looking forward to anything else you have in store for the future. By the way, you're inspiring me big time.
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Milkman, The First Drop

Postby Lord » Fri Aug 28, 2015 5:09 am

If I'm inspiring people it's all worth it. :)
Thanks Jojishi
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Battle of Britain, Motion Comic

Postby Lord » Mon Oct 26, 2015 4:17 pm

A different, and much faster way of doing a thing, have a look here guys, let me know what you think, would you like to see more of this?
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Battle of Britain, Motion Comic

Postby SharpBeast » Sat Nov 21, 2015 6:50 am

honestly idk what to say..... reminded me that I can draw epic drawings anyways.... even though I haven't drawn anything in like 2 years now...
It was nostalgic anyways. Funny but it reminded me how much time I spent drawing stuff. I spent like 2-12 hours on one drawing back then. I kinda want to draw something again lol.
(lol I was drawing stick fights when I was a kid too :D)
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - LordPivot Origins - The Great War

Postby Lord » Sun Dec 13, 2015 11:21 am

Took 4 months, but here's my newest animation, LordPivot Origins - The Great War. >:)

Have a looksie, and enjoy ;)
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - LordPivot Origins - The Great War

Postby Cheese » Sun Dec 13, 2015 11:42 am

Damn, that was absolutely amazing, your shit is awesome.
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - LordPivot Origins - The Great War

Postby Kermit » Sun Dec 13, 2015 11:43 am

It's been so long where I've been too busy focusing on what's happening in the animation instead of critiquing every flaw, that was really entertaining to watch and the movements were on point as well. Great job overall, hope you keep making stuff like this in the future too
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - LordPivot Origins - The Great War

Postby SIFTER » Sun Dec 13, 2015 11:45 am

I love everything about this from the story to the animation by itself. Everything is so atmospherical and well put. I especially love the story. There are some visual flaws to it such as the eye lids going out of the head's contour, but that is nothing compared to the entertainment value. So, kudos to you for finishing this one. I actually love it so much I'm going to share it on my FB page.
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - LordPivot Origins - The Great War

Postby Michi » Sun Dec 13, 2015 11:46 am

Haha, wonderful job, LP.
I'm really glad i got to help you with it, the final result was lovely.
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Frank Thomas and Ollie Johnston - The Illusion of Life: Disney Animation
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Richard Williams - The Animator's Survival Kit:
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12 Principles of Animation summarized
http://vimeo.com/93206523
Aaron Hartline and Victor Navone, animators at Pixar Animation Studios and mentors at Animation Mentor, discuss timing and spacing tips and tricks
http://www.animationmentor.com/resources/webinars/timing-and-spacing/
Pixar's 22 rules to phenomenal storytelling
http://imgur.com/gallery/E8xe0

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Re: LordPivot's Thread - LordPivot Origins - The Great War

Postby Llama » Sun Dec 13, 2015 11:51 am

That was awesome LP! Great animation and a good story to boot, seriously great job.
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - LordPivot Origins - The Great War

Postby Lord » Sun Dec 13, 2015 11:59 am

Thanks for the comments everyone.
Very much appreciated. ;)
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - LordPivot Origins - The Great War

Postby Four » Sun Dec 13, 2015 12:12 pm

That was beautiful LP. Top notch.
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - LordPivot Origins - The Great War

Postby Finom » Sun Dec 13, 2015 1:11 pm

That was amazing! I love everything in it! Can you now get out of inters?
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