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Re: LordPivot's Thread - DDG

Postby Lord » Mon Feb 22, 2016 1:42 pm

Glad you all liked this, guys. I'm aware of what I need to improve on, and would like to do so for Star Wars Part 3. Really glad you liked it. :D
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - DDG

Postby salami » Mon Feb 22, 2016 11:47 pm

I like your style! Keep it up.
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - DDG

Postby ~Raymond » Tue Feb 23, 2016 5:46 pm

That was really entertaining man! Im glad to see your ddg a success... I think you'd have a really good chance of winning if DDg had actually worked out
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - DDG

Postby Jack » Tue Feb 23, 2016 8:08 pm

DDG officially dead. ^

Either way, nice one, Lordy.
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Pivot Star Wars Part 3

Postby Lord » Sun May 29, 2016 12:49 pm

Finally...
Pivot Star Wars Part 3 for you all! :D :D :D :D :D

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Enjoy, glad to be able to pull off a 3 part series. :D
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Pivot Star Wars Part 3

Postby Cheese » Sun May 29, 2016 12:58 pm

Wow, that was great, I loved it.
The lightsaber fighting was awesome and the story was clear too.
Nice job!
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Pivot Star Wars Part 3

Postby Lord » Sun May 29, 2016 1:00 pm

Thanks Cheese. Glad you enjoyed it. :D
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Pivot Star Wars Part 3

Postby Blademaster » Sun May 29, 2016 1:50 pm

That was huge man. Much honor for creating a big one like this again. Some scenes were done really well. nice job (thumbsup
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Pivot Star Wars Part 3

Postby Lord » Sun May 29, 2016 2:50 pm

Thanks Chris. :D
'preciate it.
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Pivot Star Wars Part 3

Postby Jojishi » Tue May 31, 2016 3:20 am

Lord, you are an absolute legend for finishing that. It was so entertaining to watch and long to boot. What I really admire is that you finished off your 3 part series.

I'll point out what I liked about it. The light-sabre battle is easily the best ever animated in Pivot and even that's an understatement. It went on for a very long time and the attack moves were animated brilliantly. What made it even better was the lighting. You used the transparency feature so well here and the colours looked amazing. I can't emphasise enough how much good colour choice can make an animation look so much better.

The movements were also really good. I couldn't spot any flaws which is insane considering the animation's so long. There may have been a few faults here and there, but they weren't noticeable.

To improve I think you could incorporate more 3D angles. I think it's fine how it is right now but just changing up the perspective a little more often will help add some depth to the animation. Or, another simple way of doing this would be to have a multi-plane background. Since animating a light-sabre fight with lots of 3D would be hard, you could have had an object really close in the foreground. Maybe a pipe, a bin or a crate or something? Just something that moves faster than the other things when the camera moves. You could also have some far off things in the background moving slower.

I think if you do that so things just feel a little less flat in places and perhaps incorporate a little more detail (think things like shadows, textures etc) you can make some really mind-blowing stuff.

Anyway, I loved this newest animation from you. Sorry for the late comment by the way. I was too tired to write anything yesterday lol. I hope this makes up for it.
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Pivot Star Wars Part 3

Postby Lord » Tue May 31, 2016 8:01 am

Jojishi wrote:Lord, you are an absolute legend for finishing that. It was so entertaining to watch and long to boot. What I really admire is that you finished off your 3 part series.

I'll point out what I liked about it. The light-sabre battle is easily the best ever animated in Pivot and even that's an understatement. It went on for a very long time and the attack moves were animated brilliantly. What made it even better was the lighting. You used the transparency feature so well here and the colours looked amazing. I can't emphasise enough how much good colour choice can make an animation look so much better.

The movements were also really good. I couldn't spot any flaws which is insane considering the animation's so long. There may have been a few faults here and there, but they weren't noticeable.

To improve I think you could incorporate more 3D angles. I think it's fine how it is right now but just changing up the perspective a little more often will help add some depth to the animation. Or, another simple way of doing this would be to have a multi-plane background. Since animating a light-sabre fight with lots of 3D would be hard, you could have had an object really close in the foreground. Maybe a pipe, a bin or a crate or something? Just something that moves faster than the other things when the camera moves. You could also have some far off things in the background moving slower.

I think if you do that so things just feel a little less flat in places and perhaps incorporate a little more detail (think things like shadows, textures etc) you can make some really mind-blowing stuff.

Anyway, I loved this newest animation from you. Sorry for the late comment by the way. I was too tired to write anything yesterday lol. I hope this makes up for it.

Thanks Jojishi. :D
I really do need to start adding some 3D into my animations, they'll start looking flat in my eyes too soon enough. XD
Thanks for taking the time for that comment. :D
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Pivot Star Wars Part 3

Postby Tops620 » Wed Jun 01, 2016 4:18 am

i really liked it, it's awesome to see someone managed to finish a long animation. The light saber battle was cool. Great work.
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Pivot Star Wars Part 3

Postby Leo » Wed Jun 01, 2016 4:35 am

Man. What a fascinating animation. Great job man.
The light saber battle are wicked cool.
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Pivot Star Wars Part 3

Postby XElite109 » Wed Jun 01, 2016 10:20 am

needs more 3d though butDamn!
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Re: LordPivot's Thread - Pivot Star Wars Part 3

Postby matt meh » Wed Jun 01, 2016 3:01 pm

goddamn this is good. It completely surpassed my expectations and every bit of it was perfect. I saw no flaws anywhere. Brilliant stuff. Keep it up! ^-^
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