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Re: Spoiler in the comment! -Tops-

Postby Raymond » Wed Nov 18, 2015 1:59 pm

Congrats Tops! At this rate it won't be long before you are Veteran! :D
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Re: Spoiler in the comment! -Tops-

Postby Waffles Mgee » Wed Nov 18, 2015 2:36 pm

in that case I ought to try for veteran too
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Re: Spoiler in the comment! -Tops-

Postby tuna » Wed Nov 18, 2015 2:42 pm

Tops620 wrote:
Harry wrote:swear to god all the piv links you post never work.

But i can...okay letme give another link, i sure this one will work SDADSFADF btw.i use facebook to put the piv files, so you probably need to login to facebook to download them.Oh and this piv. is more updated than before.

well yeah im always logged into facebook so idk why it doesnt work, but the other link did. looks cool. the detail is way too contrasting imo, so it detracts from the rest of the scene/subject (the stickman), and just looks ugly. idk why you drew the glasses the way you did because, again, they look ugly as fuck. and the movement of the people seems a bit characterless and robotic, so make the movements a little more natural.
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thats all negative. i adore the detail. apart from the wood grain texture which is waayyy too strong, i love the subtle shading on the characters, and the lighting. the shadows are a nice touch ( a little too strong but still), must have taken a lot of patience. the movements are butter smooth and ugly, and what's happening in each scene is clear.
keep it going man. but please change the wood texture. it doesnt matter how long it takes, it looks so nasty and you may as well delete it or change its transparency. and maybe the glasses. if you can be bothered.
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Re: Spoiler in the comment! -Tops-

Postby Xeroz » Wed Dec 30, 2015 10:49 am

Wow man! These are awesome! You gotta tell me how you became so good! Don't stop doing these man! You're awesome!
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Re: Rocket + Wing Suit -> Turbo Skateboard//Finally an updat

Postby Tops620 » Thu Dec 31, 2015 9:44 am

FINALY AN UPDATE ASDFASDFASDF
It's been along time since i didn't update my thread
i've changed the piv. file links into sta.sh so everybody could download it(remember, it change the tab, so make sure you press the ctrl button)
and i'm planning to make 1Day1Animation chalange(is that what it called?) on january, and i hope getting veteran on february :P

Edit:Happy New Year
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Re: Rocket + Wing Suit -> Turbo Skateboard//Finally an updat

Postby Horsie » Thu Dec 31, 2015 10:34 am

Not bad but u should work on the shape of fire, the first frame is very important. Particle work is okay but u could form them into bigger ones on the first frames on effect, the end work of particles is fine. I also liked the movements.
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Re: Rocket + Wing Suit -> Turbo Skateboard//Finally an updat

Postby Jack » Fri Jan 01, 2016 8:48 pm

It's stiff in some areas, but the fire looked really good.
Good luck with that one-animation-a-day challenge, I think Stickid did that. (thumbsup
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Re: Rocket + Wing Suit -> Turbo Skateboard//Finally an updat

Postby Tops620 » Sat Jan 02, 2016 1:37 am

Horsie wrote:Not bad but u should work on the shape of fire, the first frame is very important. Particle work is okay but u could form them into bigger ones on the first frames on effect, the end work of particles is fine. I also liked the movements.


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Jack wrote:It's stiff in some areas, but the fire looked really good.
Good luck with that one-animation-a-day challenge, I think Stickid did that. (thumbsup


yep, inspirated by stickid so far so good http://sta.sh/01gs9p605dxl
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Re: 1 Day 1 Animation Tops620-

Postby Tops620 » Sun Feb 07, 2016 10:25 pm

Finaly its here
The quality arent so good because i rushed, why? shcool of course :p
now, i'll continue my boxor entry, and then blood collab, and then fire vs earth, and then legend of tur
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Re: 1 Day 1 Animation Tops620-

Postby LkPB » Sun Feb 07, 2016 11:13 pm

maan, nice work. loved them! so entertaining :D
how you going?
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Re: 1 Day 1 Animation Tops620-

Postby Jack » Mon Feb 08, 2016 7:46 am

That was pretty bad compared to some of your other stuff, to be blunt. Lots of stiffness, wacky spacing, and all around laziness. Of course, you said they were rushed, so I guess that's okay.
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Re: 1 Day 1 Animation Tops620-

Postby Lord » Mon Feb 08, 2016 11:57 am

Lots to improve on, but I watched the whole thing so that's something. :D :D
Nice music choice too . ;P
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Re: 1 Day 1 Animation Tops620-

Postby Xeroz » Tue Feb 09, 2016 5:42 pm

Oh man! These are GREAT! Moar!
BTW, this whole 1day1animation thing is not only in January, right?
I'm askin', cuz' friend of mine confused me with his sh!t.
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up fukin date

Postby Tops620 » Wed Feb 10, 2016 10:09 am

LkPB wrote:maan, nice work. loved them! so entertaining :D


Thanks (heart

Jack wrote:That was pretty bad compared to some of your other stuff, to be blunt. Lots of stiffness, wacky spacing, and all around laziness. Of course, you said they were rushed, so I guess that's okay.


yes, got no effort, except day 20 :p

Lord wrote:Lots to improve on, but I watched the whole thing so that's something. :D :D
Nice music choice too . ;P


thanks!

Xeroz wrote:Oh man! These are GREAT! Moar!
BTW, this whole 1day1animation thing is not only in January, right?
I'm askin', cuz' friend of mine confused me with his sh!t.


depend, if you want to make it a whole year or 6 months, or 2 months, or 15 days only, what you need to do is to do 1 day 1 animation

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Ayy... at first i want to make a shadow fight(not the game) but then, it would be hard to make the shadow below the wall, so i make this, at first i want to make a shadow fight, but i did mistake to make the enemy last, so i make this as a midnight practice with no enemy :p
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Re: Midnight Practice Tops620-

Postby Jack » Thu Feb 11, 2016 5:28 pm

You've got an eye for aesthetics, but you need more inbetweens. It looks inhumanly fast.
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