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Re: NV's Thread (Beginner)

Postby Cavolia » Sun Sep 06, 2015 2:43 pm

Damn I really like that spider man stuff. Keep developing that (thumbsup
Rest of your animations are a bit of a hit or miss. Some parts of them are looking good and then they kind of start to look a little choppy towards the end. I think that has to do with planning, because it seems like you lose control of where your animation scene is going and that gets you in awkward stick positioning. Perhaps try to look ahead of where you want the sticks to move.
I hope that little insight is helpful (thumbsup
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Re: NV's Thread (Beginner)

Postby Paperv » Mon Sep 07, 2015 6:33 am

Cavolia wrote:Damn I really like that spider man stuff. Keep developing that (thumbsup
Rest of your animations are a bit of a hit or miss. Some parts of them are looking good and then they kind of start to look a little choppy towards the end. I think that has to do with planning, because it seems like you lose control of where your animation scene is going and that gets you in awkward stick positioning. Perhaps try to look ahead of where you want the sticks to move.
I hope that little insight is helpful (thumbsup


Thanks man, for the critic. Glad you like it ! (smile (cheesygrin
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Re: UPDATE - Short Comboh!

Postby Paperv » Mon Sep 14, 2015 6:41 am

Hmm.. Am I ugly? I don't have any comment in this post D: ):
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Re: UPDATE - Short Comboh!

Postby ishamahes » Mon Sep 14, 2015 6:50 am

I like the Back Flip very much.
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Re: UPDATE - Short Comboh!

Postby Paperv » Mon Sep 14, 2015 8:09 am

ishamahes wrote:I like the Back Flip very much.


Woaw thx. Glad you like it! Also I like your style (wink
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Re: Lionel Messi Animation Tribute ~NV

Postby Mori » Fri Sep 18, 2015 5:12 am

me yikes thee animoochnz, naic animoochnz
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Re: Lionel Messi Animation Tribute Work in Progress ~NV

Postby Raymond » Fri Sep 18, 2015 1:13 pm

Wow I can tell you really pushed your limits with this new animation. I expected you to revert back to stick figures after the close up on his face, but I was wrong. You actually created leg sticks and animated a 3D scene. I really like it so far. I don't have any complaints about the movements. But a few of the scenes are too long in my opinion. Like when you showed the stadium and the close up of the players face and when you mentioned it was "A tribute to a footballer". The animation starts to drag out when you're staring at a static image for 5 seconds. Try removing a few frames from those scenes to shorten them. Also it should probably say "A tribute to a football player", but then again I know soccer in America is called futbol when pronounced in Spanish, so maybe "footballer" is a Spanish word. I don't know, just thought I would point it out. Keep up the good work on this project though, it's turning out nice!
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Re: Lionel Messi Animation Tribute Work in Progress ~NV

Postby Paperv » Fri Sep 18, 2015 6:39 pm

Raymond wrote:Wow I can tell you really pushed your limits with this new animation. I expected you to revert back to stick figures after the close up on his face, but I was wrong. You actually created leg sticks and animated a 3D scene. I really like it so far. I don't have any complaints about the movements. But a few of the scenes are too long in my opinion. Like when you showed the stadium and the close up of the players face and when you mentioned it was "A tribute to a footballer". The animation starts to drag out when you're staring at a static image for 5 seconds. Try removing a few frames from those scenes to shorten them. Also it should probably say "A tribute to a football player", but then again I know soccer in America is called futbol when pronounced in Spanish, so maybe "footballer" is a Spanish word. I don't know, just thought I would point it out. Keep up the good work on this project though, it's turning out nice!


Ouch! Thanks a lot!
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Re: Lionel Messi Pivot Tribute & My Brand New Doors Entry ~N

Postby Paperv » Sun Sep 20, 2015 7:56 am

Update again my rushed animation:
It is actually a speed battle with my 5.. I mean... 4 facebook friend Dang it!
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Re: Lionel Messi Pivot Tribute & My Brand New Doors Entry ~N

Postby TheWingedDemon » Sun Sep 20, 2015 11:21 am

Project Lionel Messi Tribute (Work in Progress)

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A footballer? Don't you mean soccer?





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Re: Lionel Messi Pivot Tribute & My Brand New Doors Entry ~N

Postby Ussay » Sun Sep 20, 2015 11:54 am

I liked the Rushed one, looks like you guys know what you're doing, and the new Messi tribute is actually pretty good, first scenes remind me of Cavolias DDCX, the fullbodies are good too. I'd like to see some seriously ong projects from you to make sure at what level of animation you can keep animating, just keep practicing, bro :D (Y)
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Re: Lionel Messi Pivot Tribute & My Brand New Doors Entry ~N

Postby Paperv » Mon Sep 21, 2015 5:32 am

Ussay wrote:I liked the Rushed one, looks like you guys know what you're doing, and the new Messi tribute is actually pretty good, first scenes remind me of Cavolias DDCX, the fullbodies are good too. I'd like to see some seriously ong projects from you to make sure at what level of animation you can keep animating, just keep practicing, bro :D (Y)


Thanks, I like your Path to Darkness Animation too! (thumbsup (grin
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Re: Lionel Messi Pivot Tribute & My Brand New Doors Entry ~N

Postby Paperv » Mon Sep 21, 2015 5:58 am

TheWingedDemon wrote:
Project Lionel Messi Tribute (Work in Progress)

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Frames: 403/3060


A footballer? Don't you mean soccer?


Don't mind that text, I will edit it (scool
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Re: Lionel Messi Pivot Tribute & My Brand New Doors Entry ~N

Postby Paperv » Thu Sep 24, 2015 1:56 am

My new joint with Mori! :D
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